SUMMER HOLIDAY:I felt very happy this summer,because i learned a lots. At the begin of this summer holiday, i read some books,All of them are famous in the world, some of them are from china, others are from English. and i saw them online ,because it cheap ,it no use to buy them. after that i payed a visit to my grandmother and grandfather. there , learn some thing about how to do a good-man,and what the hava done when they at the age of mine. at that time , i feel that i am out of my contral. At the end of this summer . i felt the most interesting and happiest
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