一封邮件,请诸位大神帮忙翻译成英语,急用,非常感谢。。

亲爱的马克主编:
今次寄去我们的两份研究材料:
一份是运用主客观基本规律进行数学建模,形成一支独立的生命数学体系,这支数学可以进入人们生命领域,达到从最初生命形成到生命终结这一全过程的运算求解。
另一份是以“生命数学”为工具进入人类遗传生命领域,全面揭示出人与人之间为什么存在差别(差别主要是指遗传疾病和遗传智力),这些差别的根源在何处。进而从实践中确立了数学遗传学。
这两项研究是“工具”与“解剖”的研究,自世界基因工程后而发起的探索人类生命,揭示生命延续中奥秘的一项数学遗传工程。它的最终目的就是揭示出人与人之间差距的根源,寻找人类优质遗传的平衡点,从而驱逐人类遗传中先天性残疾、重大恶性病变和低智等顽症。从此使人类避免自由和无目的的生育,进而有重点的优质生育,从根本上提高人类体质和智能素质。
我们的研究是史无前例的,数学遗传学开辟了人类遗传的新领域。所以,要论证它,必须通过实践。(您可以在世界范围内寻找大量的例子,通过数学遗传学自然遗传公式的求解,然后把得到的结果与实际结果进行对比、论证)

这个是我自己翻译的。语法基本上没多大的问题。以后再提问将文字用图片形式发出来,就能避免机器翻译充数了。

Dear Editor Mark,

This email encloses two pieces of materials:
The first one is an independent life mathematic system modeled from subjective and objective basic disciplines. This system can be applied to human lifecycle and simulate the process of initial birth to ultimate death.
In the other material, "Life Mathematics" is adopted as a tool for human genetic filed, it reveals and explores the reasons why there are differences between individuals, including genetic diseases and genetic intelligence. Furthermore, "mathematic genetics" is established.
These two materials are researches of "tools" and "analysis", which are mathematic generics projects to explore human life and reveal life generics since the world generic project. The ultimate objective of these researches is to reveal the origin of individual differences, and to seek the balance point of human advantageous genetic characters, in order to eradicate geneogenous disabilities, vital malignant pathological changes and oligophrenia, therefore to avoid the disordered and blind human reproduction, to establish high-quality breeding to enhance human's physique and intelligence.
Our researches are unprecedented, the mathematic generics opens an entirely fresh area for human generics. Therefore, the validation of the researches must be through practices. (You may collected cases worldwide, simulate them by the mathematic generics formulation, and compare the simulated results with those of the actual cases to validate.)

Yours Sincerely,
XXX

时间紧任务急,你自己再修改一下专业名词。追问

你的翻译最贴切,谢谢了,你的英语水平很高,我要向你学习

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第1个回答  2015-01-16
Dear mark, editor:

This time send two of our research material:

A subjective and objective basic rule is to use mathematical
modeling, the formation of an independent life mathematics, the mathematical can
enter the field of life, from the end of the first life form to the whole
process of operation to solve.

Another is \"life mathematics\" tools into the field of human
genetic life, fully reveals why there is a difference between people, the
difference is mainly refers to genetic diseases and genetic intelligence), where
the root of these differences. And then established the mathematical genetics
from practice.

The two studies is the study of the \"tools\" and \"anatomy\",
since the world of genetic engineering while the exploration of human life,
revealing the secrets to continue life a mathematical genetic engineering. Its
ultimate purpose is to reveal the root of the gap between people and people
looking for high quality human genetic equilibrium, thus expelling congenital
deformity, major malignant lesions in the human genetic and low intelligence
such as persistent ailment. From then on human freedom and birth without any
purpose, to avoid, in turn, has a focus on high quality bearing, fundamentally
improve the quality of the human body and intelligent.

Our study is unprecedented, mathematical genetics has opened up a
new field of human genetics. So, to prove it, must through practice. (you can
around the world looking for a large number of examples, by solving mathematical
nature genetics genetic formula, and then compared the results with the actual
results, argument)
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额 大神 你是用翻译机翻译的吧????

追答

我们有专门的软件,你觉得不通顺是吗?

追问

恩 专业名词翻译的不是很贴切 麻烦你再帮我捋顺一下 我可以再给你加分

追答

关于专业名词,我也看过了,确实是翻译的不太好,但是我这边就只能帮你翻译到这个水平了,呵呵,你可以把专业名词进行修改。

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第2个回答  2015-01-16
Dear mark, editor:
This time send two of our research material:
A subjective and objective basic rule is to use mathematical modeling, the formation of an independent life mathematics, the mathematical can enter the field of life, from the end of the first life form to the whole process of operation to solve.
Another is "life mathematics" tools into the field of human genetic life, fully reveals why there is a difference between people, the difference is mainly refers to genetic diseases and genetic intelligence), where the root of these differences. And then established the mathematical genetics from practice.
The two studies is the study of the "tools" and "anatomy", since the world of genetic engineering while the exploration of human life, revealing the secrets to continue life a mathematical genetic engineering. Its ultimate purpose is to reveal the root of the gap between people and people looking for high quality human genetic equilibrium, thus expelling congenital deformity, major malignant lesions in the human genetic and low intelligence such as persistent ailment. From then on human freedom and birth without any purpose, to avoid, in turn, has a focus on high quality bearing, fundamentally improve the quality of the human body and intelligent.
Our study is unprecedented, mathematical genetics has opened up a new field of human genetics. So, to prove it, must through practice. (you can around the world looking for a large number of examples, by solving mathematical nature genetics genetic formula, and then compared the results with the actual results, argument)追问

谢谢,以后希望还能得到你的帮助

追答

不用谢. 好的

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