请大家帮我改正下英语日记

希望大家不要笑额...我连大小写也打下来

Today,is school opens a NO.1 day. also i enter the school a NO.1 day.今天,是开学的第一天.也是我进入这个学校的第一天.

In the new classes ,have my past classmate,butmore many is not konw's schoolmate.在这新班级里,有我的旧同学,但更多的是我不认识的同学.

Hope we can take good friend.希望我们能做好朋友.

我高一了,英语成绩差,所以用这个方法试试
以后可能每天都有,麻烦大家了,谢谢
开头忘了。Fed 11th sunny

我知道啊，可我不会。。

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Today is the first day we came back to school.It's also the first day I spent in this school.Some old classmates will continue to be with me for the following three years,but more classmates are new to me.I hope I can adapt to this new environment quikly,and become good friends with my new classmates.
我按照你的重新翻译了一下，你看行吗？
二月简写是Feb

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中译英不可以逐字翻的哦~~

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