我是一名高三学生,这是我写的作文,麻烦哪位老师帮我批改一下,谢谢了!(第二张是要求,草稿有些乱)

如题所述

According to the report, our country some smokers about three hundred million people every day, nearly three thousand people died from smoking related to disease, each year nearly more than people died of lung cancer, coronary heart disease with smoking related disease, more than the tuberculosis. On May 31 each year "world no tobacco day" to limit public smoking.
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第1个回答  2017-04-19
eerful of companions. It does追问

啥意思?

Are you English teacher?

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