英语作文,一次甜蜜的回忆,三段记叙文。

如题所述

写作思路:可以写和父母之间的故事回忆,也可以写和老师或者同学之间的故事的回忆,中心要突出且明确,语句要连贯,条理要清晰。

正文:

There are many beautiful memories in my "memory record". Whenever I open it, the past is vividly in my mind.

在我的“记忆录”里珍藏着许多美好的回忆,每当我翻开它,往事历历在目。

Last autumn, it was clear and crisp, and it was the fruit ripening season. "Gee, gee, gee," the crisp bird calls welcome my mother and I to the countryside. It happened that grandma was going to pick fruit, so she gave us a bamboo basket, and we took the basket on the road.

去年秋天,秋高气爽,正是水果成熟的季节。“叽叽叽叽”,清脆的鸟叫声欢迎我和妈妈来到乡下。正巧奶奶要去摘水果,便分给我们一个竹篮,我们拿着竹篮上路了。

Walking on the golden paddy path, the breeze blowing, caressing my face, straw swaying with the wind, we three people like swimming in the rolling rice waves. "Baa ~, baa ~" we went to the sheepfold, and the owner of the sheepfold said hello to us warmly. Look! These lovely sheep are eating the spare grass grain; the walking sheep are like white clouds floating in the sheepfold.

走在金黄的稻田小路上,微风吹过,轻抚着我的脸庞,稻草随风摆动,我们三人就像在滚滚的稻浪中游泳。“咩~,咩~”循声走去,我们来到了羊圈,羊圈的主人向我们热情地问好。瞧啊!这几只可爱的绵羊,吃着备用的草粮;那几只散步的绵羊像朵朵白云在羊圈飘动。

Finally, we came to the orchard, a smell of fruit penetrated my nose, I rushed in. At the foot of the brown red leaves, to the earth paved with a layer of luxurious carpet, walk on the soft, can be comfortable!

终于,我们来到了果园,一股水果的清香钻进了我的鼻子,我直冲了进去。脚下棕红色的落叶,给大地铺上了一层华贵的地毯,走在上面软绵绵的,可舒服了!

I saw that the trees with sparse leaves were covered with red and bright persimmons like small lanterns. Several adults stepped on high ladders and climbed onto the fruit trees and picked several at once. I couldn't stand it any longer, so I decided to climb up and have a look.

只见叶子已经稀稀拉拉的树上挂满了小灯笼似的又红又亮的大柿子,几位大人踩着高高的梯子,爬上了果树,一下子采了好几个。我再也按耐不住,决定也爬上去看一看。

Grandma stopped me and said, "you'd better hit with a branch." I decided to climb up and have a try. "Miso" I climbed up the long ladder, but after only five or six steps, my legs became weak and my feet were empty. It was terrible. I quickly stepped back down.

奶奶忙拦住我说:“你还是用树枝打吧!”我哪甘心,毅然决定爬上去试一试。“噌噌噌”我爬上了长梯,可是只爬了五、六步,我的腿就发软了,脚下空荡荡的,太可怕了,我赶紧退了下来。

"Ah With a deep sigh, I willingly picked up the long and thick branches on one side and hit the trees with one stroke of my hand. My mother came up and took my hand and said, "look, take it like this. To choose the right target, slowly close the branch to the fruit, and then tap gently.

“哎!”我深深地叹了口气,心甘情愿地捡起一旁长而粗的树枝,一举手便直接往树上瞎打。妈妈走过来把着我的手说:“看好,这样拿。要选准目标,把树枝慢慢地靠近果子,再轻轻地一敲。”

The voice just fell, mother fierce a force, a persimmon obediently fell into the embrace of the earth. It's a little bit like that when Monkey King picked ginseng fruit. But this persimmon must be put on for a few days, and it will be delicious when it is soft. Otherwise, I must try one first!

话音刚落,妈妈猛一用力,一个柿子乖乖地落进了大地的怀抱。还真有点当年孙悟空采人参果的感觉。可是这柿子得要放上几天,等它软了才好吃,不然,我肯定先要尝上一个!

Now I often recall this matter, my mouth is still full of persimmon sweet!

现在每每回忆起这件事,我的嘴里还满是柿子的香甜哩!

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第1个回答  2020-07-28

创作思路:

确定中心,写出深意。我们要着于挖掘所写事件中含有的生活哲理或找出它闪光的地方,反复思考,确定文章的中心思想。

即善于从普通的小事中写出深意来。文章的六要素要交代清楚。一件事情的发生,离不开时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过和结果这六方面,即常说的“六要素”,只有交代清楚这几方面,才能使读者对所叙述的事,有个清楚、全面地了解。

范文如下:

Hildhood memories like a treasure chest, there are happiness and sadness, bitterness and sweetness, 

that unforgettable moment let me have endless aftertaste. I'll choose the sweetest story to tell you.

童年的往事就像个百宝箱,有快乐有悲伤,有苦涩有甜蜜,那难忘的瞬间让我回味无穷。我挑一个最甜蜜的故事说给你听。

It was the fourth grade, the hot summer ushered in a rare storm, the whole school was instantly involved in a black vortex, 

thunder and rain shook the earth, the gloomy sky, the original quiet campus into a confused place.

那是四年级的时候,炎炎夏日迎来了罕见的暴风雨,整个学校瞬间被卷入了一个黑色的旋涡中,雷声雨声震撼着大地,阴沉沉的天空下,原本宁静的校园变成了迷茫之地。

 At this time, when school was over, the waterfall like heavy rain made the students panic. 

Some were crying for their parents, some were scared to cry At this time, 

the most worried about me, should be my parents, they are also looking for me everywhere.

此时正值放学之际,那瀑布般倾泻下来的大雨,让同学们惊慌失措,一些哭着找父母,一些被吓得嚎嚎大哭……此时最担心我的,应该是我的爸爸妈妈,他们也在四处寻找着我。


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