请英语专业的同学帮我翻译我想说的话

Question

就是把我想说的话翻译成英文，谢谢！！（不要奇怪为什么不是翻译成日文）
“我第一次去日本时是跟旅行团去的。我看到了一些日本的风景和名胜古迹。我很喜欢，我很想再去玩一次。不过我只看到了日本的表面，我想更深一层的了解这个国家，所以我必须要得到交流生的名额，这样就可以更深的了解它。也可以再去日本玩了。”

Answer 1

“我第一次去日本时是跟旅行团去的。我看到了一些日本的风景和名胜古迹。我很喜欢，我很想再去玩一次。不过我只看到了日本的表面，我想更深一层的了解这个国家，所以我必须要得到交流生的名额，这样就可以更深的了解它。也可以再去日本玩了。”
翻译为：
When I first went to Japan is to go with the tour. I saw some Japanese scenery and attractions. I love, I want to play once again. But I only see the surface of Japan, I would like a deeper understanding of this country, so I have to be exchange students in places so that you can understand it deeper. Japan can go play.
绝对正确，放心好了~

Answer 2

The first time I went to Japan was with a tourist group. I went to see the scenic spots and historical places. I loved them, and I want to go there again someday. However, it was only sight seeing, and I want to learn more about the country. That's the reason I want the quota for exchange student, which would give me another chance to study while living in the country.本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

When I first went to Japan's group tour. I saw some Japanese scenery and places of historic interest. I like it very much, I'd like to play again. But I only see the surface of Japan, I want a deeper understanding of the country, so I must get exchange quota, so can deeper understanding of it. Also can play again go to Japan. "

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Answer 4

It was in a touring party that I first to Japan.
I saw a lot of places of historic interest and scenic beauty.I
like them very much and I want to visit there again.
However,I just have looked the surface of Japan,but I want to know this country in a deep level.
Thus I must get the number of persons allowed so as to know more about Japan and visit Japan again!