求翻译,翻译的好我再追加,下午1点前给积分!

Question

至今为止没有什么事情使我归结为克服了巨大的困难才获得的成功。有些事情是我们努力就可以达到的。而有些事情即使努力了，也未必能够实现。如果说我的人生到现在为止所获得的最大成就是什么。我想应该是(此处空白)，但我想其中有一定的运气成分，不能完全归功于自己努力的结果。所以如果让我说一件最为骄傲的事情，我想应该是连续三次获得一等奖学金。刚进入大学的时候，我并不是一名学习成绩出色的学生。第一学期的排名在360人中仅仅排到280多位。可能是大部分学生的共性，那时的我并不在意成绩，更看重自己所参与的社团工作。可是随着时间的推移，我越发感觉到在学校这个环境里，学习成绩是一切发展的基础。强烈的责任感和表率心驱使我不断追求成绩上的进步，优异的成绩与出色的工作最终也相辅相成，成为我当选的基础。记得最困难的是大三第二学期，也就是我当选校学生会主席的第一学期，平时紧张的工作经常迫使我旷课去参加市里面的一些会议、活动。而工科那繁重的课业即使是好多上了课的同学也无法理解。多少个夜晚的挑灯夜战，考前连续几个通宵的彻夜未眠。当我最终拿到第三个一等奖学金时，终于松了口气。如果说大学的经历让我学会了什么，那就是强烈的责任感，和那种拼搏的精神。
正是由于本科时代的社会实践，我发现与科研工作相比，自己更喜欢与人交流，团队合作的工作。经过自荐和考试，本科毕业后，跨专业保送到管理与经济学院攻读研究生。在研究生期间，我接触了经济学、管理学不同种类的方向，包括企业财务管理、市场营销、人力资源管理、战略规划、企业结构和股票市场等。通过学习和相关调研，我发现自己对企业价值评估和有价证券市场等方向具有浓厚的兴趣，所以我希望能够应聘贵公司。除此以外，我也对国际贸易和市场销售领域比较感兴趣。
我对资本运作具有敏锐的直觉和偏好，喜欢阅读相关的专业报纸、杂志和文献，具有良好的沟通能力、组织能力与协调能力，具备快速学习能力，责任心强，同时具备工科背景，知识面广泛。我愿意结合我所学习的知识，在机械电子制造业，销售行业乃至其他相关领域为贵公司的发展壮大尽我最大的努力。
xjc916老兄,谢谢你的辛苦翻译.可是经过比较我发现xqq_qn的翻译要更为自然一些,真是难以取舍啊.可惜百度不能把分劈成两半,要不我真想给你们俩一人50分.所以只有非常遗憾的说一句抱歉啦!
如果愿意交个朋友,给我发个小窗吧.我再给你开一个问题,我身上只有50分啦,把这50分都给你.
最后再次感谢你的帮助!谢谢!

Answer 1

那两个一样的是机器翻译的，呵呵
看我的怎么样。不过真的是自己翻译的。
Till now, I’ve attributed nothing to success achieved by conquering big difficulties. For some of them, we can achieve by making great efforts. For some others, you may not achieve even you had try your best. If you ask me what’s my greatest achievement in my life so far? I think it should be (blank). But there must be some factors of chance, and can’t attribute all to my own efforts. Therefore, if you want to hear one thing that I was most proud of, I think it should be winning the First –class Scholarship three times continuously. When I just entered into the university, I was not an outstanding student in study. I ranked about 280 for all the 360 students in the fist semester. Maybe it’s the commonness of most campus students, I cared more about the association work I participated in than academic results. However as the time passed by, I realized that academic results was the basis for all the development on the campus. Driven by strong sense of responsibility and the desirability to be a model, I began to pursue academic results unceasingly. At last, the excellent academic results and outstanding work complement supplemented each other, and they became the basis for me to win the election. I still remembered that my most difficult time was in the second semester of junior. It’s the first semester that I was elected to be the President of the Student’s Association. Busy and tense work often forced me to stay away form school and to participate in some meetings and activities hold by municipal government. And as for the engineering courses, it’s too onerous to comprehend even for the some students who attended the class. I’ve forgotten how many nights I sit up to study till midnight, and even stay up all night before the examinations. I only got relaxed after I won the third First-class Scholarship finally. If you ask me what I’ve learned from the experiences of campus, my answer is the strong sense of responsibility and spirit of fighting against difficulties.

As a result of the practice and experience during the campus life, I found that compared with science and research work, I prefer to communicate with people and work in the team. Through self-recommendation and examinations, I approved to pursue master degree in Management & Economy School. During that time I got to know the different aspects about management and economy, including enterprise finance management, marketing, human power management, strategic program, enterprise configuration, stock market, etc. Through study and relating research, I found that I have deep interests in enterprise value evaluation and securities market. So I hope that I can work for your company. Besides, I’m also interested in the fields on foreign trade and marketing.

I have keen intuition and preference about capital management, and love reading relevant professional newspapers, magazines and literature. I have good ability in communication, organizing and coordination, and in study and adapt quickly. I have a wide range of knowledge, with engineering background and strong sense of responsibility. Combining what I have learned, I’d like to try my best to make contribution to the development of your company in the field of machine electronics manufacture, marketing or even some other relevant fields.

Answer 2

So far nothing I attributed to overcome enormous difficulties to the success. Some things we can strive to achieve. Some things even harder, we may not be able to achieve. If my life up to now have access to what is the greatest achievement. I think it should be (blank here), but I think there's a certain element of luck, not entirely due to their efforts. So let me say one thing most proud of, I think it was the third consecutive first-class scholarship. Just entered the university, I am not an outstanding academic student. Ranked 360 in the first semester of the number of people just turned 280. Most of the students might be common, and then I do not really care about the results, but also the importance of their participation in social work. But with the passage of time, I feel more in the school environment, school is the foundation for the development of all. Driven by a strong sense of responsibility and I have been exemplary achievements in the pursuit of progress, the outstanding achievements and good work will ultimately complement each other, I was elected as the basis. Remember that the church is the most difficult second semester, I was elected President of the students are the first semester, I usually hectic work absenteeism often forced to participate in some meetings inside the city and activities. Engineering and heavy homework if it is a good lesson for many students fail to understand. The number of night late in the night, the night before attending several consecutive night out. When I finally got the third first-class scholarship, finally heaved a sigh of relief. If experience has taught me that the University learned what it is a strong sense of responsibility, and the kind of fighting spirit. It is precisely because of our era's social practice, I found that research and work, with people like themselves more, the team's work. After examination, volunteer and, after graduation, to send a multi-disciplinary study Graduate School of Economics and Management. In graduate, I contact the economics and management of different types of directions, including financial management, marketing, human resource management, strategic planning, corporate structure and the stock market. Through study and related research, I found their assessment of the enterprise value of the securities market and has a strong interest in the direction that I want to recruitment firms. In addition, I also interested in international trade and marketing fields. I have a keen intuition of the capital and preferences, likes to read the relevant professional newspapers, magazines and literature, have good communication skills, organizational ability and coordination capacity, rapid learning ability, strong sense of responsibility, with an engineering background, extensive knowledge. I would like to combine my knowledge learned in machinery and electronics manufacturing, sales, as well as other related fields for the development and growth of your company the best of my efforts.

Answer 3

Until now did not have what matter to cause me to sum up for has overcome the success which the huge difficulty only then obtained
Some matters are we may achieve diligently. But some matters even if diligently, also can realize not necessarily. If my life obtains until now the greatest achievement is any. I want to be supposed to be (here blank), but I thought has certain luck ingredient, cannot give credit to completely the oneself diligently result. If therefore lets me say a most arrogant matter, I want to be supposed to be continual three times obtain one and so on the scholarships. Just entered the university time, I was not an academic record outstanding student. The first semester place arranges merely in 360 people to more than 280 positions. Possibly is the majority of student's general character, at that time I did not care about the result, regarded as important the mass organization work which oneself participation. But along with the time passage, I even more felt in school this environment, the academic record is all development foundation. The intense sense of responsibility and the model heart urge me to pursue in the result unceasingly the progress, the outstanding result and the splendid work finally also complement one another, become the foundation which I was elected. Remembered most difficult is the great three second semester, also is I was elected the school student association president's first semester, usually the intense work frequently forces me to ditch school participates in the city surface some conferences, the activity. But engineering course that arduous schoolwork even if is schoolmate who many attended class is also unable to understand. Front how many night working by torchlight, tests continual several all night not to sleep all night. When I finally attain third one and so on the scholarships, finally relaxed. If university's experience let me learn any, that is the intense sense of responsibility, strove for success the spirit with that kind.
Is precisely as a result of the undergraduate course time social practice, I discovered compares with the scientific research work, own like with the human exchanging, team cooperation work. After offers to volunteer with the test, after the undergraduate course graduates, cross specialized recommends for admission to school the management and the economical institute studies assiduously the graduate student. In graduate student period, I contacted the economic, the management science different type direction, including enterprise financial control, market marketing, human resources management, strategic plan, enterprise structure and stock market and so on. Through the study and the correlation investigation and study, I discovered oneself to the enterprise value appraised and directions and so on negotiable securities market have the strong interest, therefore I hoped can respond to a call for recruits your firm. Except for this, I also am interested to the international trade and the market sale domain comparison.
I have the keen intuition to the capital operation and by chance, likes reading the related specialized newspaper, the magazine and the literature, has the good communication ability, organization ability and coordinated ability, has the fast learning capability, sense of responsibility, simultaneously has the engineering course background, the aspect of knowledge is widespread. I am willing to unify the knowledge which I study, in the mechanical electronic manufacturing industry, the sales profession and even other correlation domain grows strong I greatest endeavor for your firm.
不一定准确~~水平有限

Answer 4

Up to now didn't make me return knot what is up for the success overcome a huge difficulty to just acquire.Some affairs are what our efforts can attain.And some affairs even worked hard, also don't necessarily can carry out.If my life up to now the acquisition get of the biggest achievement is what.I think should be(here blank), but I want to have certain luck composition among them, can't be attributed to completely oneself effort of result.So if let me say the most proud affair, I think should be acquire an etc. scholarship three times continuously.Just entered time of university, I wasn't a to study an outstanding student of result.Rank for a semester in 360 people to line up to more than 280s only.May be the total of greatly parts of students, that time of I combine inattentive result, thinking greatly of the association work that the oneself participate more.But along with change of time, I feel more and more in the school this environment, study the result is all the foundations of the developments.The strong sense of responsibility and the example heart order about I pursue result continuously up of progress, the excellent result is end with outstanding work also complement each other, become the foundation that I win an election.Remember big three the second semesterses is most difficult, be also I to win an election student leader in school for a semester, peacetime the nervous work usually forces some meetings,activities that I cut class to attend the inside of the city.And engineering that heavy lessons even is a lot of have a class of the classmate can't also comprehend.How much the night pick a light to fight for night, continuing before test a few all-night all night don't sleep.When I am end to get hold of the third an etc. scholarship, loosenned tone finally.If say the career of the university lets me master what, that be the strong sense of responsibility, with that kind of the spirit for work hard.
Is exactly because of social fulfillment of undergraduate course ages, I discover to compare with the research work, the oneself even likes to communicate with person, the team cooperate of work.Has been recommended with the examination, undergraduate course graduation after, across profession to recommend to the management to persue graduate student with economic college.In graduate student period, I contacted the economic, the management science different type direction, including enterprise financial control, market marketing, human resources management, strategic plan, enterprise structure and stock market and so on.Pass a study with the related investigation, I discover an oneself to have strong interest to the directions, such as the business enterprise value valuation and the negotiable security market...etc., so I hope and can accept appointment your company.In addition to this, I also sell realm to the international trade and the market more interested in.
I have the sharp intuition and hobby to the capital operation, like to read the related professional newspaper,magazine and cultural heritage, have a good communication ability,organizational skill and moderate an ability, have a fast study ability, the responsibility is strong, having the engineering background in the meantime, the knowledge noodles is extensive.I would like to combine the knowledge that I study, at the machine electronics manufacturing industry, the sale profession is the development that goes to other related realms as your company strong exhausted my biggest effort
呵呵！！

Answer 5

骗人都是翻译软件翻译的，你唬小孩啊！！！
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Answer 6

为了积分下这么大辛苦至不至于了呀