第1个回答 2013-10-14
大家好，我的名字是海伦，今年15岁.我喜欢听歌，看书，我最喜欢的书是哈利波特并且七本都看过.我最喜欢的科目英语，因为英语相对比较简单.在未来，我认为我会成为一个老师.我的座右铭：是一次只做一件事，做到最好！
Hello everybody！my name is Helen, I'm 15 years old.my favorite things include listen to music and read books. the book I loved most is Hally Botter,and I fininshed the reading of all seven books of its series.
My favorite subject is English, because I think it is comparely simple,and interesting .As for my future,I think i'd like to be a teacher.and my motto is as follows：one time just do one thing,and try your best to be perfect.
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第2个回答 2013-10-14
Hello, everyone. I am Helen, a 15 year-old girl. I like listening to music and reading books. My favourate books are Harry Potter series and I read all of the 7 books.
I think I probably will be an English teacher in the future because English seems relatively easier for me.
I always believe that I can do one thing perfectly if I never give up.
第3个回答 2013-10-14
hello!my name is helen, and i am 15 years old. i love listening to music and reading. i love harry potter series and i have read all 7of them.my favourite subject is english, because english is comparatively easy. i think i will be a teacher in the future. my motto is: do one thing at a time and do the best.