第1个回答 2015-10-25
Myself
My name is Winnie（换成你自己的名字）.I'm a 15-year-old girl(数字换成你自己的年龄,如果你是男孩就把girl换成boy,下文同).I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.(Rizhao换成你自己生活的城市名）
I'm an active,lovely and clever girl.In school,my favourite subject is maths.(可以换成你自己喜欢的科目）Perhaps people think that it's difficult to study maths well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best,everything can be done well.
I also like sports very much,such as,running,volleyball and so on.
I'm kind-hearted.If you need help,please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!
This is me,a sunny girl!
Myself
My name is Liu yang.I`m a thirteen-year-old boy.I`m a student of Class Four,Grade Seven in the No.3 middle school from Luo yang .My study is well.I`m tall and strong.
I`m a diligent boy.I study hard at all my lessons.My dream is to be a knowledgeable man.I know it`s very hard.The way is very long.But I will try my best to do it well.And I belive myself.
I have many hobies.They are reading,running,swimming,playing,basketball,climbing and playing table tennis.Everyday I all need some time to reading.On Saturdays I play basketball or play table tennis with my friends.
In my free time,sometimes I help my mother with housework or do what I want to do.
I have a colorful life!
My English Teacher
My English teacher is a good man,and she is called Miss White.
She is fall,and slim,but smart.She often can help us solve many problems.She has her hoppy of own.She likes the headving traveling.The blue is his favorite colour and she often wears the blue clothes.She is helpful and she receives the first prize in the teaching competition.
In a word,my English is a very nice lady and i am proud for her.
My English Teacher
Our English teacher, Mrs Wang, is about forty years old. She always wears a pair of glasses. She is very strict with us. When we make a mistake, she often makes us stand up. But we hear that her home is far from our school. Every morning she has to walk to school for forty minutes. And she is never late. Then we come to see that Mrs Wang loves us dearly. She teaches us so carefully. In fact, she is a good teacher.
写作在英语学习中是培养和提高语言能力的有效手段，它有助于巩固和掌握所学词汇、语法等语言知识，有助于训练直接用所学语言进行思维，有利于提高驾驭语言的能力。中学生该如何写好英语作文呢？
1．认真审题立意 文章要有明确的主题，必须具备4个条件：准确、鲜明、深刻、集中。以作文“The English teacher I Admire Most”为例,文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位英语老师,因而就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。
2. 草拟提纲
文章布局要做好3件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。如命题作文中有提示句，还要从提示句的关键词出发，围绕关键词开拓思路，发挥联想，记录下联想到的东西，可以是句子或单词词组，可以是英语或汉语。仍以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，提纲可以这样写:
1）Who is the English teacher I admire most
2) My reasons
3) What can I learn from the teacher
3．写出落主题句，理文章之脉络 一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段。每段的主题句非常重要，是作者思维的起点，切题的准绳，阐述的对象。看到段落主题句，读者大致了解段落要阐述的内容。段落主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。通常将段落主题句置于段落的开头，可使文章结构更清晰，有说服力。
4. 参照提纲，紧扣主题句，完成各段落 有了段落主题句后，还需要顺着段落主题句的方向，参照提纲中的思路，从而完成各个段落。引导段要能引起读者的注意和兴趣，为主题段铺路架桥。主题段应围绕文章和该段的主题来展开。展开的方式包括：顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法，和下定义等。可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。还是以“The English Teacher I Admire Most”为例，主题段中就能用到举例法、说明法、因果法等。
第2个回答 2009-11-15
My friend
I have a good friend in my school. Her house is not far from mine. We often go to school together. She is very beautiful and lovely. No matter when you see her, you can see her sweet smiling. In her spare time, she always does sports or joins the dancing team. She likes different kind of sports. for example, swimming, do the gym(做体操）and so on. I think we can be friend for ever.
My best is Lily. She has big, smiling eyes. She has straight shoulder length hair. She is pretty. Lily is helpful. She is ready to help people any time. She is also very honest, so I can be live that she says Lily is very smart and she works hard. Lily and I will always be best friends.
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凑合凑合吧！
Hello,everyone.My name is ***(你的名字),I'm *（你的年纪） years old.I study in ***（你的学校名） Primary School.I'm in Grade*（你的年级） Class*（你的班级）. I'm going to be a junior high school student, i feel very happy.
I like football and English very much,and i often play football with my classmates after schoo.(这段可以改成你喜欢的东西)My English teacher is ***（你英语老师的名字）,she/he（女的选she，男的选he） is very nice to us,I like her/him（女的选her，男的选him） a lot.
There are three members in my family:my father,my mother and I.Both of parents love me and I love them too.
My Chinese name is XU-XINYI, and my English name is Annie. I'm studying at hangzhou Yu-Cai Experimental school ,in Class 2,Grade 4.
I like composition ,and I have learned a Children-reporter training course .I also like sports ,such as table-tennis ,swimming and badminton .
My favourite colors are yellow and pink .
I enjoy travel ,and I have visited a lot of landscape places.For eg,Hainan ,Nanjing ,Qingdao
Hello, everyone. Let me introduce myself. My name is XXX, an13-years-old boy . Now I study in Tiger Hill middle school. I live a beautiful city named XX, where I was born. At school, I'm fund of computer. I think there are some people loving computer like me. Although the computer is very difficult, I really like it. I believe anything can be done if working hard. Sometimes I'd love to play basketball, but I'm a new fish of it. Besides, I'm crazy about surfing the Internet and reading online. I like a thing unallowed, but I just love it. I hope we can hand in hand with each other at this new situation. I believe we can be harmony in our new class. Thank you all.
老师的
Our English Teacher Our English teacher， Ms Huang， came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years. She is kind and friendly to us after class， but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English.
She often says，"Practice makes perfect." She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows， teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English playS. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting， at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.
我们的英语老师黄老师是我们的英语老师，她1970年来到我们学校，已经当了30多年的英语老师。她工作努力，多年来一直是模范教师。
课下，她对我们很友善，但课堂上却对我们要求很严。她经常带鼓励我们多说多读英语，常常说“熟能生巧”。
她教得很好而且尽可能使每节课都上得生动有趣。她常给我们放幻灯片，教我们唱英语歌曲，还帮助我们排演英语小话剧。
她不仅是我们的老师，同时又是我们的朋友，我们都尊敬和爱戴她。
明天，她将出席一个重要会议，而且由于她的先进事迹将在会上受到表彰。
Our English teacher, Mrs Wang, is about forty years old. She always wears a pair of glasses. She is very strict with us. When we make a mistake, she often makes us stand up. But we hear that her home is far from our school. Every morning she has to walk to school for forty minutes. And she is never late. Then we come to see that Mrs Wang loves us dearly. She teaches us so carefully. In fact, she is a good teacher.
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我们的英语老师王老师大约四十岁，她总是带着一副眼镜。她对我们很严格。当我们出了错，她经常让我们站起来。可是我们听说她家离学校很远。每天早晨不得不走40分钟来到学校。并且她从来不迟到。然后我们最终明白了王老师非常爱我们，她非常细心的教我们。事实上，她是一个好老师。
My name is Jack. My hobbies are playing basketball, swimming and reading. I have a very short, so I used to be afraid of dog,because I thought they will nippe me.But now ,I don't afraid of them any more.
That's all,thank you!
第3个回答 2009-11-12
各两篇？？干嘛用啊。。要多少词的？
My name is Jack. My hobbies are playing basketball, swimming and reading. I have a very short, so I used to be afraid of dog,because I thought they will nippe me.But now ,I don't afraid of them any more.
唉。。自己写的和抄的果然还是很有差距啊