帮我写一封英文的电子邮件？给外国人的，高手进

Question

由于英语很差，这也是第一次给外国人发邮件，希望写的能客气，有礼貌一些。要有格式哦，开头和结尾也要，谢谢了
正文（只要意思对了就行，如果我说的不好，可以用您觉得礼貌的方式表达，适当的删减）：你好，姐姐，我是昨天和你聊天的那个喜欢漫画的中国人，我换了一个邮箱，这是我第一次给外国人发邮箱，很高兴能认识您，知道你的一些情况我很高兴（这句我知道Very good to know something about you）， 盼望早日收到你的回信（looking forward to hearing from you soon）
主题是什么？？？？？

Answer 1

翻译前我想先说明几点：

一：在国外，“姐姐”这个称呼 (Sister) 一般都是家人之间才会用的。就是亲姐妹或姐弟之间。
和其他人说话时，就算是好朋友，也都不会用到这词。尤其是不太熟悉的人。

二：“漫画” 翻译成英文是 Manga，不是 cartoon. Cartoon 是卡通的意思。

～ · ～ · ～ · ～ · ～ ·

Dear ___ (用对方的名字，如果不知道，就直接用 Hi，来当作开头。绝对不能用 sister）

Hi, I had a conversation with you yesterday; I'm the Chinese person who likes reading manga. This is my other Email address, and this is the first time I've sent an Email to a foreigner. I'm really happy to have met you, and I'm very happy to have learned something about you. How have you been lately?

Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Best wishes,
________ （自己的名字）

～ · ～ · ～ · ～ · ～

希望对你有帮助。

Answer 2

Hi dear ~

Can you remember the Chinese girl/boy who chatted with you about

cartoon yesterday?

I'm the one :)))

I've changed my email address. This is the first time that I email a

foreigner. It is a great pleasure to meet you on internet and I'm very happy to

know something about you. I hope we can be good friends :)))

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Big hugs

Yours XXX

(写过好多这种first letter，据经验给你改了改，不过意思是一样的，可能更亲切一些) 祝你很快收到回信~~~

Answer 3

你知道她的名字吗？最好开头痛她的名字
Dear XX:
I had a chat with you yesterday,I'm the Chinese guy who likes comic book (不知道你是喜欢漫画书还是动漫。。我写的是漫画书，如果不是你就自己改下吧)~
I got a new email address, ,This is my first email to foreigner,it's very pleased to know you and it's very good to know something about you,I'm so glad that I can make friend with you!looking forward to hearing from you soon

XXXXX（你自己的名字）
13/08/09（日期要日月年哦）

主题就写简单一点好了：

Hey!It's XXX！！（你的名字）

我给小老外发邮件想不到主题一般都这样的。。。

Answer 4

既然是邮件，就没必要写得太正式，不然会让人觉得拘束，而且无趣。

Dear** ：(直接说名字好了，外国人不行喊姐姐什么的）
Do you remember me? I am **(名字),the Chinese boy\girl talking cartoo with you yesterday. With a new E-mail address, it is a great pleasure for me to write to you, because this is my first time to make a pen-friend with a foreignor.

I am very happy to such a friend like you.这里最好加一些你们彼此感兴趣的话题，这样回信时，让人有话可回。 May I know more about you through e-mail? Please keep my new E-mail address in mind and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Answer 5

Dear Sis,

I am the Chinese person who likes manga and chatted with you yesterday. I have changed my email address.

This is the first time I am writing an email to a foreign friend. I am delighted to know you. It was good to learn about you too.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
XXX