妹妹的学历证书要翻译成英文,但妹妹觉得我找人翻译的不准确,大家帮我看看好吗?
原文:
毕业证书
学生:李阳 性别:女 1985年7月1日生,于2005年9月至2008年7月在本校 旅游英语(航空服务)专业三年制专科学习,修完教学计划规定的全部课程,成绩合格,准予毕业。
校名:北京经贸职业学院
我找人翻译的:
The student Liyang ,Set:female,Was born in july 1 ,1985, has studied in English tourist(air services) Professional of this Institute from September ,2005to July 2008 for 3 years. she completed all the courses in the Teaching profram. The result is qualified ,permits the graduation.
School : Beijing Professional Business Institute
妹妹翻译的:
The student YangLi, female, was borne on 1st July 1985, traveling English (aviation services ) profession, has successfully completed the 3-year studies from September 2005 to July 2008 in this school. She completed all the courses and the result is qualified , she is permitted to graduate.
School: Beijing Professional Institute Aviation College
大家帮我看看哪个准确,如果都有出入可不可以帮我在翻译一下,。谢谢!