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I still remember a funny thing of mine when I was a child. I have been short-sighted since I was thirteen years old.
But I don't like to wear glasses because it made me feel unfortable.One day,when I after school, I walked happily.Soon, I found a woman like my mother very much.Of course I thought she was my mother.
Then I walked to her happily and spoke loudly :"Hey,mom. I miss you all day!"But 'mother' was very surprised and said:"What?Who are you?" Why did mom ask me who I was? I wore my glasses then.
God ! She wasn't my mom! I said sorry to her and ran away as fast as I can.From then on, I also wore my glasses when I after school. Because I didn't want to make a mistake like that any more.
我仍然记得我小时候的一件趣事。从十三岁开始,我就成了近视眼。但我不喜欢戴眼镜,因为它令我感到不舒服。一天放学后,我愉快的走着。
很快,我发现一个长得很像我妈妈的妇女。当然,我以为她就是我妈妈。然后,我愉快的走向她,大声的说:“妈妈,我整天都在想念你!”但“妈妈”非常惊讶,说:“什么?你是谁啊?”为什么妈妈会问我我是谁呢?于是我戴上我的眼镜。
天啊!她不是我的妈妈!我向她说了对不起之后,就尽我可能快的跑开了。从那一次开始,当我放学之后我总是戴上我的眼镜。因为我不想再犯下像那次那样的错误。