求助英语作文

Advantages and disadvantages of doing a part-time job
要求:
1打工给学生带来很多好处
2打工有很多弊端
3我的看法

字数120左右,3-4段,总分总的格式,每段有主题句,后面为举例,段与段之间有连接词

第二个
写一封信对朋友入大学表示祝贺
1对朋友进入大学表示祝贺
2介绍大学生活和中学生活的差别
3对如何渡过大学生活提出自己的建议

字数100-120

学校考试急用7月1日早上考试 希望有好心人帮助写下。。。。会追加悬赏分。。。谢谢
第二个作文可以一起发么。。要不然没办法给分

应该是大一的作文吧?
为了让你早点复习,我起早给你写了,赶紧看看吧!

1st,

Recently, there is a growing trend for children to take part-time jobs in their spare time, and that has aroused a hot debate among people whether they would allow their children to have part-time jobs.

People who against the part-time job have the following reasons. Firstly, it may take up most of their valuable time and have a bad effect on their study. Secondly, if children
take part in improper jobs, they are likely to be care for immediate interest.It will also affect their overal development.

However, as the proverb goes, "Every coin has its two sides." There also exists people who agree with part-time job with reasons. Firstly, it will widen their horizen and enlarge their knowledge which is different from school study. Secondly, it helps children to know more about living skills which is helpful to their futhure life. Last but not least, they will learn more about money through working and give up bad habit of not cherishing money.

In my oppinion, the advantages of part-time job are outweighing the disadvantages. We should treat the school and part-time job as the same chance for children to develop
their ability. The practice of knowlege will make the life of children more colorful.

2nd,

A Congratulation Letter
June 29th,2009
Dear James,

I am glad to hear that you have passed the college entrance examination this summer, and you have been told to be accepted by Peking University by telephone. I was very proud of you when I heard this exiting news.

It is imaginable that similarities and differeces exist in between life of senior school and university. For one thing, you should still work hard because the quantity of your major subjects are no less than your senior school subjects. On the other hand, teachers in senior school may tell what and how you should finish before of after classes, on the contrary, professors in university would hardly tell you what you should review before final examinations,and you should find out your study problems by your own effort.

Although there are some difficulties in the near future, you should have a positive attitude towards university life.Because it is a certain way to success, you may overcome the difficulties if you would like to have a bright future.

Best wishes,
yours sincerely,
Tom
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第1个回答  2009-06-28
Summer Job
The summer job is a tradition among students of American universities. Long before the end of the school year,students begin their search for jobs during vacation ( June, July, and August).
Students send letters to businesses, talk to employers about job opportunities durlng the summer, and ask friends and relarives to be on the lookout for jobs for them. By June the students have usually
solved the problem and begin to make preparations for leaving their books to enter the business world.
Reasons for wanting a summer job are different from student to student. Some work to help pay their school expenses; others work to gain experience in their chosen professions; still others work just for the fun of it.
Typist, construction worker, salesman, lifeguard, and waiter these are some of the more common jobs that students try to find during the summer months. But many young people find work that is a little more unusual.
By doing part-time jobs,college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook.What’s more,part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance/opportunity to know the outside world
也可这样写
Some students think it is advantage for college students to take part-time jobs. Because, by doing part-time jobs, they can earn money on their own so that they don’t need to ask their parents for money, and in this way, they reduce their parents’ load. Besides, taking part-time jobs can help them gain social experience, develop personal abilities and make their life enjoyable.

One the other hand, some students have a disagreement. In their opinion, the students’ main task is to study, while taking part-time jobs has a bad effect on their study. And also, it may make college students change their life views and they may think too much of money.
你自己在组合一下

第二篇
dear

When I heared the news that you had been admitted to famous university,I was quite happily . Congratulate with you very much.

The life in the university is greatly different from ours in the middle school , I believe . First , on the living type , it’s leisure and freedom in the university , which is not like tight and constraint in the middle school at all . Second , on the studying , in the university , there is no long forced to learn by teacher , no longer so many lectures to have to learn . You are learning by self-conscious and also can select you favorite lectures.

As long as you make use of your time and be studious to do every wonderful things . I believe your life in the university will be very colourful.

Yours sincerely

提前声明这是我网上找的 我英语也不好
不过你把分给我嘛 我的分好少
第2个回答  2009-06-28
自己的书自己读,看你也不是读书料,作文也要别人写,,,能学的好才怪
第3个回答  2009-06-28
1.the Advantages and the Disadvantages of Doing a Part-time Job
More and more students are doing a part-time job nowadays.Some students do the job during the vacations,some do it during school days.It is true that doing a part-time job is good for students.They can earn some money and achieve some experience which is needed when entering the society.

Hower,everything has two sides,a part-time job has some disadvantages.It takes some of a student's time that should be used for his study.If a student spends too much time on the job,he won't have enough time for his lessons,and he won't do well in his study.

To my mind,a pre-graduated student can do a part-time job,for he is going to leave school and enter the society,he has few lessons,and doing a part-time job can help him get a real job more easily.

2.Dear ***,
Hi,I am so glad to hear that you are permitted to enter college.That's great,and congratulations!I would like to give you some advice .First of all,there are some differences between the college life and the life in a middle school.In a middle school,your teacers are very strict with you,and give you lessons in detail,while your teachers in college won't be so strict,and they only give you a rough lesson.So you need to learn by yourself.Besides,a middle school student relies on his teachers and parents in his life,which differs from the life in college.It is essential for a college student to be independent.Finally,you should learn to get alone with your new schoolmates who come from the whole China.
第4个回答  2009-06-28
According to a recent survey,about 25 percent of college students have a part-time job.During summer vacation,this figure will increase to 72 percent.College students are working as tutors,waiters or salesmen.

Why do they want part-time jobs?First,they want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition.Second,they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want.

By doing part-time jobs,college students can gain some society experience and broaden their outlook.What’s more,part-time jobs can provide them with a valuable chance/opportunity to know the outside world.
Students' Part-time jobs

There are many advantages for a student to have a part time job. For instance, it helps him to realize that no success comes from nothing.

It enables him to be independent and builds up his self-confidence. Therefore, part-time jobs can get the students out of the ivory tower and give them the opportunity to know more of himself and of his personal value in society.

As everything has two sides, the disadvantages can't be ignored. Part-time jobs cut into students' study time; some even become so preoccupied with making money that they ca ‘t focus their attention on studying. In the end, the students may fall behind or fail in their studies.

In my opinion, students can choose to take up a job according to their own situation. The most important thing is for him to keep a good balance, put his study on top of the list and assign an adequate amount of time to it.
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