初三考生求英语作文

快要中考了,我的英语作文写得不好,在复习期间想出了几个中考英语可能会考的英语作文的题目,请高人帮忙写一下,捉捉刀
作文题是:我的一次成功经历(短文必须满60个字 )

我想写的内容是:我参加了一次英语竞赛,在参加之前我做了很多复习工作,在网上查资料,向老师同学求助等等。最后我得了第三名,我感到很高兴,因为在过程中学到了许多知识,我认为过程比结果重要得多

因为我是初中生,所以请高手在作文中不要出现太多不符合初中教育的生词,还有,句式上最好变化多一点,有一两句复合句,宾语从句什么的就最好了,谢谢!
腾飞的华之龙,你这说的是废话,要是本人写得好还用求助吗?这又不是五六百的语文作文。我们老师还一个劲的让我们背别人写的范文呢。还“没意思”,你说的是风凉话,我写得烂中考扣个七八分上不了好高中你负责啊?站着说话不腰疼,不会就别来说废话,让人心烦

What is success? And what is experience?
I attended an English competition last month. Before that Competition I went to internet to search information and reviewed my books. I spent a lot of time to learn from my teacher and at the same time talk with my classmates. Then I got what I want. When I saw my name which on the third line of the victorious name list, I knew the answer.
Success is win. But the thing which make me excited is not success but experience. Yes, process gave me a good class and success was just a result.
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第1个回答  2009-06-18
One successful experience of mine

Before i joined in this english competition, i have done a great revision by checking it through Internet, and asking for help from my dear teachers and classmates. Finally, I got a praise of Third for that competition, and i feel so happy that i got many knowledges in the process.
For the most important thing is I realise that process is more important than the result.

我已经尽量避免生涩的词了,不晓得这样子的回答,能不能帮到你呢?

呵呵。。。。
第2个回答  2009-06-18
只有根据自己的亲生体会才能写出好作文。想想吧。加油.考个好高中。祝你好运。
第3个回答  2009-06-18
Once I joined an Englishh completion.
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