高考英语作文问题

Question

唉，说来惭愧，本人英语目前的程度可以说是0，几乎一窍不通的那种，到顶了运气好也就30到40分，单词没几个认识的，今年参加高考..恳请有经验的朋友提供一点立竿见影的诀窍,如作文，是否能背诵篇优秀的 与题目没一点关系也能多送些分？如果有，该背哪些？实在没办法就只能抄试卷上的文章了，哭..拖分啊，英语..最后真心感谢学弟学姐们的帮助！

Answer 1

三、书面表达开头和结尾的写作

1.书面表达的开头俗话说万事开头难。其实，一点也不难。高考英语书面表达的开头句一般已为你写好。你要做的是分段缩进重起第二段。注意千万不要接着已写好的首句。一是不美观，二是不便于阅卷老师细览。那么你的起头句实际上是第二段了。开始句根据要求一般可以写的漂亮一点，即要用一些好的套语开始。比如：

①Opinions are divided on the question.(NMET2002)

②Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. (2004北京卷)

③As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.(2004北京卷)

④Although the city is modern and convenient， there are still some problems， such as air pollution， crowdedness and noise.(2004湖南卷)

⑤My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.(2004全国卷I)

⑥I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. (2004全国卷III)

可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意，总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头，这是一大忌。有些开头可以以套语开始，或以俗语开始比较有力，这样就容易被老师看好。档位在开始时就已定得很高了。现以2004湖北卷书面表达试题的开始句为例看考生的千奇百怪的错误：

①Some students agreed start learning English from childhood.

②Some students think： we should learn English from childhood. Because of we have a good memory in childhood.

③Some students considered it's useless to slart learning English from childhood.

④One group thought its necessary to start learning English from child.

⑤In some students opinion， we shall start learning English from childhood.

⑥Some of students considered that children at their ages had a good memory…

2.书面表达的结尾：⑦⑧结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位，通常结尾都要算一个内容要求，所以，写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。好的结尾可以是一段，由一句或几句话组成，能使全文增色。例如：

①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help.( 2004全国卷I)

②It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. (2004全国卷III)

③What's more， some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program? (2004福建卷)

④Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. (2004浙江卷)

⑤By the time mom came back， I had finished the work. Mom praised me， and I felt proud too. (2004重庆卷)

⑥In short， the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.(2004湖北卷)

但是，在实际的操作中，许多考生却不知如何来结尾，原本一、两句话或极少的表达就可很圆满地完成写作任务，往往又旁生枝节，写上一些废话，甚至错话，结果因表达不当又被扣分。以2004年湖北卷书面表达试题考生的错误为例，可以看出很多考生是吃力不讨好的。结尾中主要的错误体现在不必要的累赘和废话上面：

▲结尾的枝节(不必要的累赘)

①In a word， the discussion is broken……

②In my opinion， the students should enjoy free， sunshine， flowers， the walks in the beauty of the countryside not except the studying.

③Though they have two different kinds of opinions about this discussion， but they are very friendly in this discussion
This evidence shows that the importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.

45. 由于这些理由？我…。

For these reasons， I …。

例∶由于这些理由？我认为在台湾接受大学教育是明智的。

For these reasons， I think that receiving college education in Taiwan is wise.

46. 总而言之？…。

In conclusion， …

= To sum up， …

例∶总而言之？好国民应该遵守交通规则。

In conclusion， a good citizen should abide by traffic regulations.

47. 因此？我们能下个结论？那就是…。

We can， therefore， come to the conclusion （that）子句

例∶因此？我们能下个结论？那就是世上自由罪珍贵。

We can， therefore， come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as freedom in the world.

48. 如果我们能做到如上所述？毫无疑问地？…。

If we can do as mentioned above， there can be no doubt （that）子句

例∶如果我们能做到如上所述？毫无疑问地？我们就能精通英语。

If we can do as mentioned above， there can be no doubt that we can master English

49. 因此？这就是…的原因。

Thus， this is the reason why …。

例∶因此？这就是我重感冒的原因。

Thus， this is the reason why I caught a bad cold.

50. 所以？我们应该了解…。

Therefore， we should realize （that）子句

例∶所以？我们应该了解学英文不能没有字典。

Therefore， we should realize that in learning English we cannot do without a dictionary.

51. 因此？由上列的讨论我们可以明了…。

We， therefore， can make clear from the above discussion （that）子句

例∶因此？由上列的讨论我们可以明了毅力可以克服任何困难。

We， therefore， can make clear from the above discussion that perseverance can overcome any difficulty.

52. 1. 从～观点来看？…。 From the ～ point of view， …。

2. 根据～的看法？…。 According to ～ point of view， …。

例∶从政治的观点来看？这是一个很复杂的问题。

Answer 2

现在的作文讨论的很多 你开头可用different people have different opinions 或者 opinions are divided on the question 然后你就可以举例中间用这些词串连 firstly secondly thirdly in addition 最后总结用in conclution或 in my opinion 中间的讨论 如果反对这个观点就用 speak up against 解释原因 用这个句型 the reason ,they argue ,is based on the definition the ..... 如果是写信格式的 开头用 glad to recive your letter 结尾用im looking forward to hearing from you本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

你是哪里的呢？你最好把你们那里的最近几年的高考题拿出来好好的读几遍，你就不要看完型和阅读了，你把单选，单词拼写，改错读十几遍，你就会发现他考得就是那么几个知识点。作文嘛，那个什么赵松涛英语作文预测http://ewteacher.com/zst/你去看看吧，挺好的，希望对你有帮助吧，我也要高考了，加油吧