求英语高手，把一句话分为两句

Question

increased oxidative and nitrosative stress (O & NS) status, as well as changed
pro-inflammatory cytokines and pro-apoptotic components as compared to controls
, which are the key trigger factors that may activate NF-κβ
and caspase-3 pathway in the development of depression-pain symptom.

Answer 1

这样分成两句就可以了：
… increased oxidative and nitrosative stress (O & NS)status, as well as changed
pro-inflammatory cytokines and pro-apoptotic components as
compared to controls. These are the key trigger factors that may activate NF-κβ
and caspase-3 pathway in the development of depression-pain symptom.

These are 和 which are 有相同作用。

希望帮到了你，满意敬请采纳，谢谢。

Answer 2

这里不是一句话啊，只是一个句子成分。
increased oxidative and nitrosative stress (O & NS) status, as well as changed
pro-inflammatory cytokines and pro-apoptotic components
是这个部分的主语
后面是个which定语从句修饰主语，然后再是that从句修饰factors。追问

主要是觉得句子很长，想改为两句

追答

你自己写的？给谁看啊？给外国人看这样写挺好，没有必要改。给中国人看更没必要改了……
你一定要改下面的人那样改吧。

Answer 3

Comparing to control oxidative and nitrosative stress (O & NS) status are increased as well as pro-inflammatory cytokines and pro-apoptotic components are changed. These are the key trigger factors that may activate NF-κβ and caspase-3 pathway in the development of depression-pain symptom.