急急求英语作文 My vacation plans 八年级水平。开头结尾已给出。70词。要求使用be+doing的一般将来时态。

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求英语作文 My vacation plans 八年级水平。开头结尾已给出。70词。要求使用be+doing的一般将来时态。

题目: My vacation plans
开头: My vacation is coming.I'm planning to do something interesting things.
内容: …………………………………………………………
结尾: A great vacation.I can't wait!

My vacation plans
My vacation is coming.I'm planning to do something interesting things. For me nothing is more enjoyable than delicious meals. I like travelling to another city but I hate shopping even many girls like it very much. So I will never spend a second in a department store. My plan for the coming holiday is to take a trip to Kunming with my parents. My father will be driving the car of course as I am too young to drive. It is nearly 240km from my home to Kunming and it will take us about 3 hours to get there. We decide to stay in Kunming for two nights. I have a plan for the journey. I have bought a new camera. I will try to take some photos in my jouney even on our way to Kunming from the car. As we planned, we will be stying in a 4-star hotel. From 7 to 9 of the first night we will be sitting in one of the famouse restaurant to enjoy some locally well-known food. In the second evening we will be visiting mu uncle' family who is actually a close friend of my dad.I believe I will enjoy my trip.

A great vacation.I can't wait!
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第1个回答  2012-11-02
I am going to Beijing for vacation, I'm going there by bus. I'm leaving on Monday and I am staying there for a week. I am going sightseeing .I am going hiking in the beautiful mountains. i am going to the Great Wall. I love nature and I can forget all my problems.A great vacation.I can't wait!
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I am going to Beijing for vacation, Beijing is a good place to have fun.I'm going there by bus. I'm leaving on Monday and I am staying there for a week. I am going sightseeing .I am going hiking in the beautiful mountains. i am going to the Great Wall. I love nature and I can forget all my problems

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第2个回答  2012-11-02
My Vacation Plan
My vacation is coming.I'm planning to do something interesting things. I'm going to Beijing .I know there are many people who are very friendly.And I'm going to Tian'an Men square and taking photos.Then I'm visiting Beijing hutong and eating some traditional food.
A great vacation.I can't wait!
第3个回答  2012-11-02
My vacation plans
My vacation is coming.I'm planning to do something interesting things.
I am taking a long vacation this summer.I thought about going to Beijing or Tibet. But decided on Shanghai.I'm going to Huangpu River.I'm leaving the first week in July and staying until Apirl.I plan to have a very relaxing vacation.I'm taking walks, going fishing and going bike riding.I think Shanghai is a beautiful country in China.I think this vacation can make me feel relaxed.A great vacation.I can't wait!
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