well-known sport did by everybody . we all suggested that doing some sports or'' people sporting''.

Question

because sport is very important for a country. nowadays many people think that sport stars are attracting too much pulic attention earning too much money .
in my opinion they are well desered.
firstly athletes reprensent a country as well as a goodwill ambassdors when they take part in international affairs. they will play important roles
老师请点评这是我刚刚写的关于运动员收入引起人们的非议

Answer 1

【点评】你写的不错啊，进步很快啊！
上边是题目吗？不完整啊。
你的英语文章虽然较短，但是有一定的说服力。我稍微给你改动一下：
The Chinese government launched a nationwide fitness campaign many years ago.
Everyone in our country is called on to take part in sports because sports are very important for a country. Nowadays many people think that sports stars are attracting too much public attention because of earning too much money.
In my opinion, the pay they get is well deserved. Firstly athletes reprensent a country as well as a good-will ambassdor when they compete in the international games such as the Olympic Games. They will play important roles in international affairs.
Not everyone can become a fine athlete; only some people will be outstanding players. If they earn as much money as they can win the international games, they deserve so.
【译文】中国政府在很多年前就推出了全民健身运动。
我们国家的每个人都号召参加体育运动，因为运动对一个国家非常重要。现在许多人认为体育明星因挣太多的钱吸引了太多的关注。
在我看来，他们得到的报酬是很值得的。首先，运动员代表国家或亲善大使，他们在国际上参加竞赛，如奥运会。他们在国际事务中发挥重要的作用。
不是每个人都能成为一名优秀的运动员；只有部分人会成为优秀选手。如果他们赚的钱与他们赢得国际比赛一样多，那么。他们是应得的。

不知我修改的英文和翻译，你满意吗？祝你学习进步！

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Answer 2

第一句 well-known sports did by everybody 我希望这只是title 不然的话请修改

what is people sporting? its too chinglish....
还有就是你前面两句话和后面的主题没什么大关系

好吧 我帮你改写一下你再看看

Sports

We have all been suggested to do some hours of exercise weekly. Exercise and sports are very important for the well being of our body.
无关紧要的两句话我还是帮你改写了... =_=

Now a days many people think that sport stars are attracting too much public attention and earning too much money. In my opinion, their salary is well deserved. Athletes represent a country as well as goodwill ambassdors when they take part in international affairs.
虽然我不认同你的观点 但是改写就这样吧....本回答被网友采纳