一篇初中英语作文 写的很烂。请告诉我那错了，怎麽该，以及怎麽提高

Question

I‘m very like my high school life，because I konw a lot of friends and learn a lot , in school I canplay with my classmate it'sreally interesting。my favorite like subject is P.E. and math because it can exercise my body and exercise my thought although it is so difficult 。in future I will work harder than ago and try my best power 。

Answer 1

首先，你不能只写一段，起码分三段写吧，我不知道你们初中生的作文要求，如果字数要求很低的话，开头和结尾可以只用一句总结性的话语就可以了。其次，你的内容也得有层次，只有分段才能让这种层次明显的体现出来。最后你的英文表达太中式了，不地道。
第一句就有问题，应该是I like my high school very much.就像我说的，你可以把这句放在第一段作为一个总起句，然后说：the reasons are as follows（原因如下）。下一段就可以写你和你的同学，然后就是你最喜欢的课程，老师等。第三段总结一下In the future I will work much harder than before and try my best .

Answer 2

like是动词，不能直接接在be动词后面，like也可以做介词，是好像的意思，I‘m very like my high school life这句意思就变成了我很像我的高中生活。交朋友应用make friends or make acquaintance with sb 在学校应用at school. my favorite like subject is P.E. and math because it can应该为 My favorite subject are P.E. and math they can. in future I will work harder than ago and try my best power 。这句中 than ago 可以去掉，power也要去掉，try my best 就是尽我最大的努力的意思。

Answer 3

I like my high school life very much becausse I learnt a lot and made a lot of friends here. I can play with my classmates at school. It's really interesting. My favorite subjects are P.E.and math because they can make me strong and exercise my brain though they are difficult. In the future I will work harder than before .
要想提高英语作文，要多读多记，熟练掌握单词和短语的用法。背或熟读课文不失为一种好方法

Answer 4

I like my high school life very much, because I learn a lot of friends .At school I canplay with my classmates it's really interesting.My favorite subjects are P.Eand math, because they are very fun/interesting...(褒义词）in future I will work harder than ago and try my power 。
多注意词序以及Be动词的用法am用于I，are用于you，is用于她他它

Answer 5

I‘m very like my high school life，because I can make many friends and play with them .Meanwhile,I can learn a lot of knowledge. my favorite subject is P.E. and math,
even though it's so difficult ,but it can keep my health and improve my thinking ability .I will work harder than before and try my best to do it 。追问

Meanwhile 什么意思