第1个回答 2012-06-15
(1)is going to改为would go to,过去将来时。
(2)因为用的是while所以前后动词的时态保持一致,用ringing
(3)将pay to 改为pay for pay for 后面接名词 为…而付钱;赔偿;为…付出代价;pay to后面接的是付款的对象 比如sb
(4)将the去掉,或者将wrong改为matter。
(5)将a放到easy后面,
(6)将scary改为scared
(7)将hundreds后面的s去掉,因为前面有数词six.
第2个回答 2012-06-15
原因 :
1 - What's the wrong with your grandmother .
错误: 不用the , 忘了家一个问号。
由于是问题,所以必须加问号。the 是多余的。
2 - This is so a easy question that everyone knows the answer .
错误:this is such , a 应该是 an
应是this is such an ..... 因为只要a 的前面有 a,e,i,o,或u , a 将改成an . 而a 的前面是easy , 开头正是e , 是a,e,i ,o,u 的其中一个。
3 - Over six hundreds people watched the football game last night.
错误: hundred s
不应该加s , 因为hundred 自己就是一个数字,已经表达了有超过1 个以上,不用加s了。
4 . You are supposed to pay to the food in the restaurant.
错误: pay to the food
应该是you are supposed to pay for the food ...... 因为你要为那个food (食物 而还钱,不是还钱给食物。
5 . I felt scary when I heard the murder in the neighborhood
错误:scary 还有neighborhood
应该是i felt scared when i ........ 因为这句子是说那个人感到害怕,而不是我感到很恐怖。scary 是恐怖 , scared 是害怕。 而neigborhood 应该是neighbourhood .
6 . The boy was reading while the bell rang..
错误:while
while 应该改成when 因为句子要表达的是男孩读书的时候铃声突然响了,而不是男孩读书和铃声铃在同一个时间。
7 .Yesterday he told me that he is going to Beijing the next week
错误:符号。
在后面没加上句号!
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第3个回答 2012-06-15
Yesterday he told me that he wasgoing to Beijing the next week前后时态一致
The boy was reading while the bell ringing表示同时进行,时态应一致
You are supposed to pay for the food in the restaurant. pay for sth为某某付款
What's wrong with your grandmother.这是固定搭配,没有the
This is such a easy question that everyone knows the answer.应将so换成such或者so easy a question,固定搭配
I felt scared when I heard the murder in the neighborhood.表示人的心里时应用ed 形式
Over six hundreds people watched the football game last night应把hundreds后面的s 去掉
第4个回答 2012-06-15
第一句is变was,间接引语,前后时态一致,第二句while变成when,while不能接瞬间动词rang是瞬间动词ring的过去式,第三句pay to的to去掉pay是及物动词,第四句把the去掉,what's wrong固定句型,第五句so放在a后,副词修饰形容词,第五句scary变成scared,scared是修饰人的形容词,第六句hundreds后接of。采纳吧,手机打字累死了,