请帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有语法错误,初一的

Question

Last weekend,I went to visit old Henry.His room was a little dirty.SO I cleaed the house on Saturday afternoon.On Saturday evening ,I played chess with old Henry.On sunday morning,I played guitar for him.On Sunday afternoon,we watched amovie.On Sunday evening,I cooked dinner for him.He was very happy.We spent a nice weekend.

Answer 1

文章基本上语法正确，只是太多日子，成了一篇布告多於文章，所以应修饰一下:

I went to visit old Henry last weekend. His room was a little bit dirty, so I helped him to clean it on Saturday afternoon. We played chess in the evening. And I played the guitar for him the next morning. We watched a movie later in the afternoon. I cooked him a dinner in the evening. He was very happy. We spent a wonderful weekend together.

Answer 2

总体来说没有什么错误。went to 就是去的意思，visit 拜访也是去的意思，所以有点啰嗦，你直接把went to visit 改成visited 就行了，然后 His room was a little dirty 和 后面那句 so I cleaned the house on Saturday afternoon 是因果关系，所以你把so 前面的句号改成逗号，然后把so 小写，变成一个句子。 还有乐器前面通常加定冠词the ，所以要改成played the guitar.
on Saturday evening 等短语楼主没有用错。本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

错误1： I cleaed the house，clean的过去分词是cleaned
错误2：on Saturday afternoon 你现在已经具体到afternoon了，就不能用介词on了，而该用in。On Saturday evening等同理
错误3：I played guitar，乐器前面要加the，应该是I played the guitar
错误4：we watched amovie，首先是a和movie没有分开，再次，一般看电视是watch TV，看电影是用see，如果是看电视就应该是we watched TV，看电影的话就是we saw a movie/film
错误5：We spent a nice weekend我们度过了一个愉快的周末通常用have，则应是We had a nice weekend
错误6：楼主的英文标点后面都没有打空格，不规范哦
以上，尽管啰嗦了些，但是希望对楼主有用

Answer 4

cleaed——cleaned
sunday——首字母大写
watched amovie——watched a movie
没有语法上的错误，楼主学得很认真，不过句子结构处理得不好，需要进一步提高， Saturday 、Sunday重复太多，说一次就行，你可以尝试把时间短语放在句末，不要用逗号分开。
特备说明一下：
watched a movie没有问题，用see也没有错，前者更合适；
played guitar ，guitar这个词前面加不加the都没错
Because His room was a little dirty.So I helped……
because引导的原因状语从句是不能单独成句的，这是语法错误。
on Saturday afternoon等短语 楼主没用错。不使用Saturday 的时候才用in，比如in the afternoon

其实楼上已经给出不少好建议了，也有一些纰漏，鄙人路过只是想帮上一点小忙。谢谢围观。

Answer 5

如果只是初一的，那么上述行文没有任何问题，楼上几位的改进版本并不是一个初一学生可以写得出来的；在不强调行文内涵的连续和修饰的情况下，使用简单直白的陈述方式是最直接有效的；如果句子正确，逻辑无误，可以给予10分可以给8-9分；其实很多人上了大学之后，反而把最简单直观的表达方式和能力给忽视了。