指出我写的这段英文中的语法错误和不恰当的地方

Question

We all here witness a great epoch, which would been the greatest times in the history of China. Now we are ready to cope with our adversaries within or without our nation vigilantly and brave, resolute to do our works well and manfully, to use practical methods. Above all, we must win for ourselves the domination of the world, that our nation could be stronger and greater.

Chaos and Order,what are the permanent topic in the world, are now hot discussing. The rising of China is at hand, accompany with dispute and conpetition. That we should not lie supinely on our backs once more, for we know the challenge tomorrow will bring are the greatest of our lifetime. We cannot wait for any longer. From today, we must implored ourselves never to wedded the base spirit of gain and greed, which will sap the hardy virtues in a nation. That while we toil, we gain, and finally a great and strong China will stand out in the east of the world

Answer 1

第一句话中，时态不对。we all are here witnessing a great epoch, which will be the greatest time in the history of China. 第二句，搭配。Now we are ready to cope with our adversities with our national people's intelligence and wisdom and bravery, resoluting to do our works well by using practical methods. 第三句：表达错误。Above all, we must win the domination of the world by ourselves, thus our nation could be stronger and stronger.
第三句：语法错误。Chaos and Order, which are now being discussed, are the permanent topic in the world.第四句：语法。The rising of China is at hand, accompanying with disputes and competition.第五句：表达错误。That we should not lie supinely with our backs once more are the greatest challenge of our lifetime. 第五句：如果wait不加宾语不用for，we cannot wait any longer. 第六句：你要表达什么呢？From now on, we should not implore ourselves base on the spirit of gain and greed, which will affect the virtues of diligence. If we try our best, and I believe China will stand up in the east of the world, strongly.

Answer 2

呵呵，你还不如写中文上来，让人给你翻译成英文了。