英语作文 初一

Question

My favourite hobby
My favorite hobby is reading books, I often read books at home in my free time.I not only read some interesting books like novels,but also read some educational books.I like reading quietly , so I usually do it alone.I either read my own books, or borrow from my friends to read.In short,I have alreadyread a lot of books up till now.I can learn lots of knowledges from books.They are like my good friends and teachers.I love reading books.Maybe I`ll be a novelist in the future.Iwould like to make my hobby my future career.

我最喜欢的爱好
我最喜欢的爱好是读书，我经常在我业余的时间在家看书。我不仅读一些像小说这样有趣的书，而且还读一些具有教育意义的书。我喜欢安静的读书，所以我经常独自一人。我要么读我自己的书，要么从朋友那儿借来读。总之，到现在为止我已经读过很多书了。我能从书中学到许多知识。它们就像我的良师益友。我热爱读书。也许我将来会做一名小说家。我愿意把我的爱好变成我的事业。

评价一下，句子不通的改一下哈，谢谢啦，实在是太渣了，麻烦了！

Answer 1

My favourite hobby
My favorite hobby is reading books, I often read books at home in my free time.I（加do） not only read some interesting books like novels,but also read some educational books.I like reading quietly , so I usually do it alone.I either read my own books, or borrow from my friends to read.In short,I have already read a lot of books up till now.I can learn lots of knowledges from books.They are like my good friends and teachers.I love reading books.Maybe I`ll be a novelist in the future.I would like to make my hobby（加into或把make变为turn into) my future career.
括号内为改的内容，
写的不错啊，连词用的都很好，一般学生都用不上连词，
好评！very good！追问

你改了最不该改的两个地方

追答

呵呵，请注明为什么？没有助动词是句子？没听说过make sth sth......

Answer 2

Dear, Nancy ! How's it going ! Now let me tell you something about my family and the weather in my city. Now it is summer here so the weather is very hot and rainy . There are four people in my family. My father is a reporter and he is watching the news on TV. My mother is a teacher and she is washing clothes . My sister is a nurse and she is talking with her friends on the phone.追问

what?