帮忙做英语短文改错题,急用,谢谢!(每行一个)

When I got back my hotel room at 7:30 last night(1. )
there was a notice that a Mr Frank Smith(2. )
had telephoned at 3 o'clock in the afternoon and that(3. )
the message told Mr Smith would appreciate my(4. )
answering to the call as soon as I came in.I had(5. )
no idea that who he was or what he wanted,(6. )
but I thought I'd better telephone him.(7. )
I noticed that there wasno telephone number after all(8. )
and I wondered how the telephone operator would(9. )
take an important message as this for me without writing the telephone number.(10. )

(1. got back后面加to,指定回到的地点 )
(2.notice改meeeage,有一个消息,便条。而不是通知。而且主要下面第4行也用了meeage )
(3.去掉that,多余 )
(4. told改said,tell要加sb)
(5.去掉to,多余 )
(6.去掉that,多余 )
.(7.正确 )
(8.after改all,竟然没电话号码 )
(9. how改why,为什么接线员把如此重要的信息留给我却没有写下电话号码呢)
(10writing后加down,写下电话号码。as似乎对,like像的意思)
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第1个回答  2008-07-13
第8个 after--- at

第九个 would ---could

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