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Run as Forrest Gump
Running is not only a speed, but also an attitude.
In the beginning of the film 《Forrest Gump》, Forrest had no sooner was bullied at his school than he turned back and keep running. Maybe you think he is a coward. In my opinion, It is not dare to face difficulties, but a kind of way to solve the problem. I believed that it is a wise man’s behavior.
It reminds me of case that I was in difficulties and I always avoid facing the thing that I have not enough confidence to finish. In a word, I always shrink back when facing difficulties. For example, these day of prepared for CET-3, I had a plan for myself everyday, include before sleep and after wake up, but I have not beaten my sleepiness in night. And I should have got up early to memorize words, but it was so cold that I was unwilling to do it. I always can’t be like Forrest Gump, who can always run ahead of difficulties when meeting them. I shall tell myself that I should run as Forrest Gump.
In the movie war, Forrest in spite of his live, running as a superman to saved his best friend. And he also saved many soldiers.
In our daily life, everyone has friends who always together with us. What’s more, we maybe sleep in a bed together. However, If she was in dangerous, could you regardless yourself live to save her? I am afraid I will hesitate. So from since today I must learn that run as Forrest Gump for my friends.
The last part of film, Because of the heroine who leaved him, he kept on running everyday and followed the sunrise and sunset. I think he is in the pursuit of his eternal. He didn’t stop until the heroine came back.
How many things that I want to finished. However, how long I continued. Study, dream, I don’t think I persist in them. At my junior high school, I want to be a costume designer in the future. Because of my parents who have not agreed me to join in art class, I have to give up. I dreamed to be a Chinese teacher when I was a high school student. But the third year when I found I couldn’t pass the examination undergraduate so I gave up my dream again. Today, I major in International Nursing, It is firmly that I will to be a beautiful nurse.
Run as Forrest Gump. Obviously, a bright future is awaiting me.

第1个回答  2013-01-01
作为福雷斯特gumprunning不仅是速度,也是一种态度。影片的开头《福雷斯特甘》,福雷斯特刚被欺负他的学校比他转身跑。也许你认为他是一个胆小鬼。在我看来,这是不敢面对困难,而是一种解决问题的途径。我认为,这是一个明智的人的行为。它让我想起了我在困难的情况,我总是避免面对的东西,我没有足够的信心完成。总之,我总是退缩时面临困难。例如,这些天准备cet-3,我有一个计划,我自己每天,包括前睡眠和醒来后,但我没有打我的嗜睡在晚上。我应该早起背单词,但它是如此寒冷,我不愿意做。我总是不能像福雷斯特,谁能总是走在困难时,他们的会议。我告诉自己,我要为福雷斯特甘。电影中的福雷斯特战争,尽管他的生活,作为超人救了他最好的朋友。他也救了许多士兵。在我们的日常生活中,每个人都有朋友谁总是与我们在一起。更重要的是,我们也许睡在床上。然而,如果她是危险的,你可以不管你自己活救她吗?我怕我会犹豫。所以从今天开始我要学习,作为福雷斯特阿甘,给我的朋友。最后一部分的电影,因为女主角是谁了他,他一直在日常运行和之后的日出和日落。我认为他是在追求自己的永恒。他不停止直到女主角回来了。许多事情,我要完成。然而,我持续多久。学习,梦想,我不认为我坚持他们。在我初中时,我想成为一名服装设计师在未来。因为我的父母谁也不同意我参加艺术类,我不得不放弃。我梦想成为一个语文老师,当我是一个高中生。但第三年,当我发现我不能通过考试本科所以我放弃了我的梦想再次。今天,我主修国际护理,它是牢固的,我会是一个美丽的护士。作为福雷斯特阿甘正传。显然,一个光明的未来正等待着我。追问

晕。我是要您帮我改,不是翻译,这是我自己写的

第2个回答  2013-01-01
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