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unforgettable days
In holiday,My family went to Bei Jing,My family went to Tian An Men,have a lot of people.The people were as many as ant.everywhere have people.Then our went to Jing Shan Park.The Peak view was very beautiful.I can see lake\tree.....The Peak have big wind.Bei Jing not only is big city,and that have many people
中文:在假期里,我和家人去北京,我们去天安门,有好多人,人多得像蚂蚁一样,到处都是人,然后我们去了景山公园,山顶的景色很孭,我看到湖\树....山顶有好大风,北京不仅大,而且人也多

Answer 1

令人难忘的天 在假日, 我家去到北京, 我家去Tian 人, 有很多people.The 人民是和ant.everywhere 有people.Then 我们去京掸人Park.The 高峰景色是beautiful.I 能非常看一样多lake\tree.....The 峰顶有大wind.Bei 京不仅是大城市, 并且那有许多人

Answer 2

During the holiday,my family and I went to Beijing.We went to Tian'an Men Square,and there were hundreds of people everywhere just like some ants.Then we payed a visit to Jingshan Park.It was wonderful on the peak.I found laks and trees around the park. It was heavy windy there. Beijing is not only a big city,as well as a big population.本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

什么意思啊？你是指英译汉还是汉译英啊，怎么看得那么别扭啊？