请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误(这是对我非常重要的特殊情况说明)

我的翻译:
Now, all the exam about 'networking essentials' were completed, after my calculator, my final score is 50.91%.
I think this is a quit danger score because the minimum request of this subject is 50% and I don't know if there would have some mistake when I do this calculator. In fact, I was very seriously face all my subjects this semester, but to be honest this subject is quite difficult and I also notice a have the learning problems when I started studying.(我在一开始学习这门课程时,学习方法存在这问题。) . And also, unfortunate, there has some big family issues about on me this semester. I was not only went to special consider and special need to ask for help, but also take antidepressant drug (nova)(药物名称) which has quite strong side effect. Also, I apply the special consider for the exam and got the permission through councilor support. (申请了考试的special consider并且在councilor的支持下得到了批准). I am not sure if the final mark could let me pass this subject. But I really tried very hard on this subject. I hope you could consider my 'special consider' when you give me the final mark.

Many thank.

    Now, all the exams about 'networking essentials' have been completed, after my calculation,my final score would be 50.91%.

    I think this is a quite danger 

    the minimum requirement

    some mistakes  when I do this calculation

    I have very seriously taken all my subjects this semester

    but to be honest,

     I also realised that I had learning problems when I started my study

     And furthermore , there some unfortunate thinngs happened in my family in this semester.

    I then turned not only to special consider but also to special need for help.

    meanwhile I also took antidepressant drug (nova)(药物名称) which has quite strong by-effect.

    Also, I have applied with the special consider for the exam and got the permission with the support from the councilor. 

    Sincere thanks.



因时间关系,我大概看了一遍,没大动,只是更正了一些语法错误。希望有帮助。

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第1个回答  2014-11-03
Now network essential exam for this course has been completed, according to my own calculations, my final score may be 50.91%
Taking into account the qualifying score needs to be 50%, so I think this is a very dangerous score, because I do not know if my calculation is biased.
In fact, I have seriously in all the subjects this semester, however, that the subject has its difficulty
And I think, on my way of learning in the subject is also problematic
What is worth noticed is that In this semester some unfortunate things have happened to my family. I was not only went to special consider and special need to ask for help, but also take antidepressant drug (nova)(药物名称) which has quite strong side effect.Also, I apply the special consider for the exam and got the permission through councilor support.
I don't know if my final score passed the exam, but I am really trying to learn the course.
When you give a final rating ,you can take my special consider circumstances into account, as well as the efforts made by me
第2个回答  2014-11-03
I finished all the tests about the subjectnetwork essential. According to my calculation, maybe my score is 50.91%.

In consideration of the pass mark is 50%, Ithought it’s a very dangerous score. Cuz I'm not sure whether there isdeviation or not. Actually I was treated this subject seriously, but thissubject is difficult. And I thought there are some problems with my learningmethod of this subject. Besides, some unfortunately things happened in myfamily. At the same time, I have been asking for help from the special considerand special need of the school and also have been taking many anti depressionmedicines but have huge side effects. Also I had applied for the specialconsider before the exam and got the support from consuller and had passed it. I’mnot sure whether I past this exam or not, but I was really striving about thissubject. I hope when you are deciding about my score, can you plz think about my special consider and all the strive that I paid. Thx.

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