第1个回答 2015-01-13
A Typical Day in My Life
My alarm clock rings at 6 o'clock every morning and I usually get up at once. Exercising for about ten minutes， I comb my hair， wash my face， eat my breakfast， and leave for school.
Generally， I go to school by bus. The bus is always crowded. In the bus， I look at the signs through the windows， watch the passengers， and even read the newspaper head lines over someone's shoulder. It takes me about half an hour to get to school.
My first class begins at eight o'clock and my last class ends at five. After school hours， I sometimes go to the Students Center or to the library for an hour or so. Afterwards， I go home.
As soon as I get home， I sit down， do my homework and study my lessons for the next day. At 7 o'clock， we eat dinner. Then I relax， watch TV， take a walk， or visit a friend.
At about 10 o'clock I get into bed and fall asleep immediately. I sleep until the alarm clock goes off again the next morning.
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本文完全按照时间的顺序，描写一天的生活。线索清晰，结构也很分明，读后使人一目了然。不足之处是句式比较单一，缺少变化。本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答 2015-01-13
Everybody has a daily schedule. I think we do the same things almost every day. My typical day is probably like yours.
I get up at 6:30 every morning. Of course I wake up with my alarm goes off, I set one of my favorite music as the alarm bell, therefore, I take my time waking up. I rise and shine with a stretch. It's another good day. I fold up the quit, I turn on the radio and listen to some news, meanwhile I brush my teeth, wash my face and comb my long hair, I put on light makeup every workday morning,I never wear heavy makeup, wearing makeup not only makes me look good but also protects my skin from environmental hazards. But I wear no makeup during weekends. Now there is a neat office lady in the mirror, all dressed up.