第1个回答 2020-02-26
1楼的仁兄,给的时态不对,有些句子需要斟酌一下.
today
was
my
birthday,
i
had
a
birthday
party
at
home.
lots
of
my
friends
came
to
my
house
around
5
pm
and
gave
me
many
presents.
during
that
time,
we
ate
a
yummy
big
cake
and
sing,
dancing
in
my
room.
today,
we
had
lots
of
fun!
今天是我的生日,我在家举办了一个生日派对。我的朋友在5点左右来到了我家并且给了我许多礼物。在那期间,我们吃了一个美味的大蛋糕,在我的房间里唱歌跳舞。今天,我们过得很愉快!