报告可在收到通知两个月后的前三天内提交

Question

怎么翻？
lonnerover:谢谢你的回答，in two months是两个月后的意思。但是原文并未说一定是在两个月后收到通知，你明白我的意思吗？可能是三天后才收到通知，再过两个月可以开始提交报告（前三天内提交），所以in two months不恰当。

andychewbj:感谢你又做了补充！after the 60th day of receiving the notification这个结构还是怪怪的？！你想表达“收到通知的第六十天后的千三天内”是吧，但是还是有“连续收到多份通知”的感觉，而且你怎么能肯定“两个月”就一定是“六十天”？^_^

马来西亚亚戴:你写了那么多，我很感动！但是通观你的所有翻译，都出现了the expiry of two months这个结构，我们说the expiry of a contract，但不会跟上一段时间，你说是吗？

绝情老鼠：看到你的回答了谢谢，我在另一个提问中做了解释，你可以去看看。

kronecai：the next three days following the second month after....怎么样？感谢你的宝贵想法！

voltava的也很有感觉。。

谢谢大家的回答， 但是分数只能给一位，可惜了。然而没关系，我的分数还有很多，以后还有机会送给大家 哈哈，不急O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

Answer 1

翻译建议:

(A) You may submit reports within three(3) days upon the expiry of two(2) months from the date of notification.

(B) Reports may be submitted within three(3) days upon the expiry of two(2) months from the date of notification.

(C) You may submit the reports within (the first) three(3) days after the expiry of the two-month period which commences from the date of notification.

补充:

1.感谢您的评语.
2.虽然 "expiry" 多用在 "contract",但这并不意味着它不能被用来指"时间=期满".几个例子:

(a)"My driving licence expired last month."
(b)"His three weeks' leave expires tomorrow" (期满)
(c)"The date of expiry is shown on your driving licence." (期满)

3.所以 "within three(3) days upon the expiry of two months" ( 期满两个月后的[前]三天内)是可以接受的.

4.如果使用普通/简单的英语(非高级标准/英语)表达也可以:

"Two months after you receive our notification, you may submit your reports within the first three(3) days at the end of that two-month period.”

请再指教!

Answer 2

The report will be submitted in the first three days after being notified in two months.

收到通知我改成 notified了

in two month 不是指两个月内，是指两个月后，这歌你可以查一下相关的资料。
举个例子：
这本书最多两个月后就会出版的…

This book should be published in two months at most .

我要在两个月后评价你的进步情况。

I want to evaluate your progress in two months.

Answer 3

Submit the report in the two months after three days.
报告可在收到通知两个月后的前三天内提交

我的翻译怎样 说说

Answer 4

Report is available two months after receipt of the notification to submit the first three days
希望能帮到你，要是答案还满意的话，记得采纳哦，O(∩_∩)O谢谢~！

Answer 5

The (Your) report could be submitted in the first three days after two months of the receipt of the notification.

简单，明确。收到通知的2个月后，前3天内。