第2个回答 2015-12-27
Dear John Smith,
My name is Li Ming, the college student majoring in medical science. I have learnt that Dogs Trust is looking for several volunteers (换掉volunteer). So I’m writing to apply (加入for) for this job.
As far as I am concerned, I am qualified (换掉qualifying) to do the job. First and foremost, I think dogs are (加入more) more friendly than other animals and I am willing to get along with them (换掉it). Besides, I have acquired a lot of skills at how to look after dogs well (换掉good), because I once did (换掉do) a part-time job at a pet store. What’s more, it’s a great experience of spending holiday (删除in) doing something meaningful (换掉meaningless).
Is there any possibility that (删除if) you can give me an opportunity?
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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