高三英语作文,能够有人帮我批改吗?打分。我作文很差,想要每天写写。谢谢。

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第1个回答  2015-02-17
可以的追答

养成习惯,用form a habbit

environment protecting

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to form a good habbit of environment protecting,one competition whose theme was creative works recycled from waste material was held from to by students union

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还有吗?

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during the competiton,about900students attended the competition and persented over1000works

有的

the main materials taken as waste were at exhibition on internet. among all works, liming 's work named "everyone has responsibility to protect forests"created by old newspaper and magzines won the first prize

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哦,提交是perpent,还有其他提交的词语吗

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around 200students won 123prizes respectitively

present提交,hand in也是

the actitivy has promoted our creating passion and improved our awareness of enviroment protecting

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激发热情可以改成鼓舞吗

谢谢

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第2个回答  2020-01-18
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第3个回答  2015-02-17
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