It is necessary to prevent cfiildren from seeing violent films. In recent years teenage criminals have increased alarmingly and this has happened at a time when more and more hours are being devoted to TV prngranms and films which show violent behaviour and violent solutions to all kinds of problems. Children are weak in judging right from wrong, and tend to admire film characters who solve problems by force. Then they apply what they have learned in the film to real life, which causes harmful effects on society. Therefore, violent films are harmful to children. When I was young, I had never heard of the crime of kidnapping. But now crime like this is heard mad read frequently. Only a few days ago, I learned from newspaper that a boy who had kidnapped a o-year-old child for money was arrested. The boy said he learned about kidnapping in the film. I am not saying all crimes or even mast crimes can be attributed to violent films, but observations have shown that it is a major factor。
不同场合下的“收起来”有不同的英文表达。常见的单词或短语有put away;clear away;tidy away;lay off;collect等，下面是摘自iciba写作句库的例句：
1.Put those tools away after you finish the work.
活干完之后，把那些工具收起来。
2.Clear your toys away now, children.
孩子们，现在把玩具都收起来。
3.Hand in your exercise-books.
把作业本收起来。
4.Put up your sword.
把你的剑收起来。
5.Eat what you want, and put the rest of the food away.
你尽量吃，吃剩的就收起来。
6.Tidy away your toys when you have finished playing .
你玩儿过玩具之后要收起来。
7.A storm is ing. Let's get the wheat under cover quickly.
要变天啦， 快把麦子收起来吧！
8.I want to lay off these heavy winter clothes.
我想把这些过冬的厚衣服收起来。
9.Bring the washing in; it looks like rain.
把洗好的衣物收起来；好像要下雨了。
10.We will take up the carpet and send it to be cleaned tomorrow.
我们决定把地毯收起来以便明天送去洗。
11.When the teacher came in, he grabbed the novel off the desk.
老师走进来时， 他迅速把桌上的小说收起来.
12.The waiter collected the dishes from the kitchen and carried them through into the restaurant.
侍者把厨房的盘子收起来， 送进了饭店.
13.The other carpets can be stowed away until we move to a new house.
其它的地毯可收起来，等搬进新房再用。
14.The Enterprise took in her topmast studding- sail, and hauled her wind.
“企业”号把中枪翼帆收起来，抢风行驶。
15.I have the camping things stored away till we need them.
我把野营用的东西收起来了，用的时候再拿出来。
16.She looked at it while he put up his purse.
他把皮夹收起来时，她的目光还盯着手上的名片。
17.He rolled up his umbrella, thinking the day would be fine.
他认为天将放晴，便把伞收了起来。
18.Among these I would list string and brown paper, kept by thrifty people when a parcel has been opened, to save buying these o requisites.
在这些物品中，我想列举的是细绳和牛皮纸。节俭的人在打开一个包裹时，会把这两样东西收起来，省得再买这两样必需品。
An Unfettable Challenge
When I was ten years old, I began to chat with foreigners. But I was very shy. Gradually, I became more and more confident with foreigners' help. The following year, I went to Yangzhou with o foreigners. I became their guide. First, we came into the Shouxi River. They wanted to look around the river by boat. I told them the price. Then we got into the boat. When we looked out at the sight, we all felt very beautiful. After that, they went to buy souvenirs. The sellers couldn't speak English. Though it was very hard, I tried my best to listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought some souvenirs with my help. Next, we went to a *** all zoo, and we took some photos. There were not many animals. When we felt hungry, we went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old houses. They learned more about Chinese history.
This wasn't only a big challenge but also an unfettable challenge. This opportunity made me confident and brave. I hope I can catch many opportunities in the future, then I can speak English, because I think practice makes perfect.
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自己去看看哈 还有很多
第一步. 写文章的基本步骤 读题，分析题目。
一个论点，正反论证永远都是最有力的。列大纲，就那种简单的大纲就行。
列一个大纲最多就四五分钟，除非遇到很变态的题目要想很久。 写论文的时候，我不知道大家一般都在想什么，但我一般就写这一段主旨句的时候，脑子里就赶快想例子。
写例子的时候，脑子里就赶快想这一段的结尾句怎么措辞。写结尾句的时候，就想下一段的主旨句怎么写。
这样比较快！ 最后，检查。有人有检查的习惯，我没有这个习惯，但是如果有时间的话，检查一下语法啦拼写啦之类会有好处。
第二步. 关于一篇文章的写作架构 说中国文章是八股文，但其实英文文章才是最八股的八股文。这一点经过过去一年狂读老外的论文得到了证实。
为啥现在读国外的东西越来越快呢？主要是因为他们的文章写的太清晰易懂了，每段话的第一句就是这段的主旨句，然后一个例子，然后一个结尾句，论点、论据、论证三部分特别容易找到，所以一篇很长的文章很快就可以读完。所以我说，咱们写文章也要这样，他们老外觉得这是好文章，你考托福雅思GRE，为了得高分，也得写成他们喜欢的这种样子。
所以，要严格记住，一个文章的架构，要这样： 第一段：开头段：明确点名中心，必须有中心句 第二段：论证一段（正面论证） 1. 某东西重要，为啥重要，提出第一个理由，必须要有本段的主旨句！ 2. 论据：就是举例子，用实际的例子来证明为啥要有这个理由。 3. 结尾句：其实结尾句就是本段主旨句的paraphrase，用另外一种说法说一遍就行！ 第三段：论证二段（正面论证） 1. 某东西重要，为啥重要，提出第二个理由，必须要有本段的主旨句！ 2. 论据：就是举例子，用实际的例子来证明为啥要有这个理由。
3. 结尾句：其实结尾句就是本段主旨句的paraphrase，用另外一种说法说一遍就行！ 第四段：论证三段（反面论证） 1. 某东西重要，没有了某东西就会有怎样不好的后果，提出一个坏的后果，必须要有本段的主旨句！ 2. 论据：就是举例子，举一个没有了这个东西以后的坏结果的实例。 3. 结尾句：其实结尾句就是本段主旨句的paraphrase，用另外一种说法说一遍就行！ 第五段：结尾段：明确重申中心，必须必须必须必须必须有结尾句！结尾句就是本篇文章中心句paraphrase！ 这里说一下，这种结构里，第一段必须有，任何情况下都必须有！第二段到第四段，你想说几个理由就说几个理由，一般至少要两个理由，这两个理由可以是一正一反，也可以是两正，我鼓励大家写一个反的理由，主要是1.为字数考虑；2. 为论证逻辑的严密性考虑。
最后一段结尾段，一般国外大学写论文时，可以没有结尾段，但是如果考托福雅思GRE，那么时间允许的情况下，尽量要写出结尾段，这样可以让文章更完整。 第三步，如果字数不足 字数其实是很好凑的，一可以用例子来凑字，二可以用正反论证来凑字。
比如，如果你写了两个理由以后，发现两个自然段加起来字数还是不够，那么就可以写一个反的段落，两段变成三段，论证的是一个论点，字数也上去了。 第四步，文章的修改以及互改 对文章进行修改是一定能进步的，可以自己修改，可以找别人修改。
我一般是自己修改，后来写得多了以后，写来写去也没啥可改的。如果希望对文章进行修改的话，最好再一开始练习写作的时候，就和水平较好的筒子组成写作小组，大家要写一起写，写一样的题目，一起掐时间，每次练习都当成模考一样练，然后彼此给对方互相改，这样比较有效。
如果大家写的题目不一样，人家一是不太有心情看你的文章，二是对你这个题目不熟悉，就不容易改出好建议来。关于互改小组，现在太傻寄托之类的都会有这种小组，这种小组我以前参加过一天，也学着别人发一个帖子，诸如“某某题处女作，欢迎批砖”一类的，发现要么是没人给改，要么就是别人敷衍式地给你改改、主要是希望你帮他改。
对于这样的互改小组，如果能参加到一个非常好、互动很强的、组长很有组织性和主动性的小组，那么进步会很大的。所以要参加，就找个好的，要么就干脆别参加。
第五步. 关于例子 现在网上有很多那种作文论据例子集合啊、大全啊之类的，这种东西下载两三个，稍微背背就行了，永远要记住，例子不是关键，关键是你的论点和你论证的方式，例子只是让你的论点论证过程更充实更饱满，例子不等于全部。如果花了五个小时在背例子上，却花了30分钟写文章，那就不对了。
背一堆例子发现不会用，也是白搭。所以，不要总花很多时间逛论坛、并 *** 地以收集例子为借口，其实你就是 *** 地不想写不想下笔练习嘛。
你还是得应该逼自己动笔才行。一般例子的来源有两大种，一是平时博览群书的长时间的积累；二是为了应付考试临时从网上下载例子来背。
两种方法都可以，哪个对你更有效就用哪个。 第六步. 写出来的东西过于简单，肤浅 四六级的东西不要怕简单，句子简单不代表一定很幼稚。
外国作家有的人的东西很简单，从来不用复杂句，但人家写出来的东西不得不让人佩服。所以不要妄想通过复杂句来让自己的文章变得有思想，要知道，思想是思想，句子形式只是表象而已。
如果你有了思想。
The protection of enviroment
The earth scale change of climate has brought a new kind of natural disaster and the developed and plicated city system is holding a latent risk of expanding the damage artificially. Also people has been spoiling the health since the immense quantity of chemicals have been produced and already used in pursuit of convenience and various toxic substances have been produced unintentionally and accumulated in environment. Therefore, We need some countermeasures from the viewpoint to prevent the city environment form disaster and to manage environmental risks. So we will develop and improve a new risk management system and a disaster prevention system to preserve and create the city environment where people feel easy and sound in their life.
你看着删减点也行.~