求高手汉译英!!内容如下,希望帮我翻译成英文。要流畅,无语法错误。谢谢!

在遇见你之前, 我一直认为爱是一件与运气有关的事。
现在的我仍然懦弱笨拙胆小一无是处,没法变成让你不用担心的女孩;
你用温暖建筑起来的回忆仍然构筑不起我对自己的信赖;
然而我却开始彻底倚仗者你所给的光芒存活;
我相信你,胜过与相信懦弱卑微的自己。

谢谢帮忙。答得好我会再次高分谢谢的。。

第1个回答  2012-08-18
I have been regarding love as somthing that related with fortune before I met you.
I'm still weak,stupid,timid and useless,I could not change myself to the one who will never make you worry.
I still could not trust myself with the memories you built up with warmth.
However,I completely live with the light you gave me.
I trust you,rather than to trust myself who is so weak and humble.

很喜欢这几句好,很唯美!所以想尝试着帮楼主翻译一下。
自己翻译的,不排除会有错误,但希望对你有所帮助.
第2个回答  2012-08-15
在遇见你之前, 我一直认为爱是一件与运气有关的事。
现在的我仍然懦弱笨拙胆小一无是处,没法变成让你不用担心的女孩;
你用温暖建筑起来的回忆仍然构筑不起我对自己的信赖;
然而我却开始彻底倚仗者你所给的光芒存活;
我相信你,胜过与相信懦弱卑微的自己。

Before I met you, I always thought love had to do with luck.
The current me is still weak and clumsy, always doing the wrong thing and making you worry.
The memories you built with warmth isn't enough to help me build trust in myself.
Instead, I'm beginning to completely rely and live on the rays of light you have shown me.
My belief in you triumphs my own belief in my cowardly and weak self.

这样翻译比较流畅,确切。语法保证都是正确的。
有些地方采取了一点点意译,为了让句子更通顺。

自己认真翻译的,有问题请追问、希望及时采纳—— ♥ 多谢 ⌒_⌒本回答被提问者和网友采纳
第3个回答  2012-08-20
Before I met you, I used to think love was related to fortune.
But now, I'm still cowardly, awkward, timid and nothing special, and I can't become the girl who makes you rest assured.
The memories that you built with warm still failed to establish the faith in myself.
However, I begin to live on the great brilliance that you give thoroughly.
I trust you, more that my cowardly and lowly self.
第4个回答  2012-08-15
Met you before, I always thought that love is one with luck.
I still weak and clumsy and timid useless, can not become the girl you do not have to worry about;
Warm building up memories you can not afford to still build my trust;
However, I began to completely rely on the light you give survival;
I believe that you beat and believe that the weak and humble
第5个回答  2012-08-18
Before meeting you, I always think love is a concern with luck.
Now I still cowardly timid nothing is right. Don't be stupid, you don't have to worry about the girl;
You warm up memories still build up my trust in ourselves;
However, I began to completely rely on you to shine alive;
I believe you, than to believe myself.
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