这篇英语短文,改错,简单的!!!!!英语好的看下!!

1 这是一篇英语课前演讲介绍元宵节的文章。大意就是 大家好,今天是我做演讲,希望大家可以认真倾听。 元宵节是春节过后的一个重要节日,在这个节日里,人们吃元宵。一家人在房子里做元宵,元宵象征着团圆。人们上街看花灯,大街上有很多花灯,花灯很漂亮。人们很开心,因为他们可以聚在一起。 2 hello everyone ,today is my speech .I hope everyone can listern. The lantern Festern is an important festval after the spring Festival . In the festival. people to eat Sweet dumpling . One family in the house together make Sweet dumpling. Sweet dumpling. represent family reunions. people will go to the Street to see lanterns. Street has many lanterns. lantern is very beautiful. people are happy.Because they can get together. 3 这篇文章里很多时态啊,词汇啊,好像有点差错。帮忙修改一下。希望是手动修改,改好的有追分滴,只限今天晚上之前。。。 谢谢!!

第1个回答  2019-09-06
hello
everyone
,today
is
my
speech.
改成hello
everyone
,today
I
will
give
you
a
speech
I
hope
everyone
can
listern这句话太不礼貌了
改成I
will
appreciate
you
attention.
In
the
festival.
people
to
eat
Sweet
dumpling
改成In
the
festival,people
usually
eat
Sweet
dumpling
One
family
in
the
house
together
make
Sweet
dumplings.
改成The
whole
family
get
together
in
the
house
to
make
sweet
dumplings.
people
will
go
to
the
Street
to
see
lanterns
去掉will,把see改成watch
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